/r/ShittyPoetry
Poetry "so-bad-it's-good", focusing on radical free expression for creativity.
This is a subreddit to relentlessly express the uncensored truth that is in your heart's brain.
It is encouraged to bring out your inner pretentious poetry critic as well as to tell the OP how and why you enjoyed their work.
We aren't poets, and we know it
Alas, we wish to show it
Though it's rot with no thought
Our art will be sought, or you'll be fought
ABOUT
A subreddit to fully express the shit that is in your heart.
It is encouraged to bring out your inner pretentiousness and tell the poster how much you enjoyed his work.
The "moderators" will randomly and unashamedly assign flair as they see fit.
If you have a problem with your flair, feel free to write a poem about it.
Formatting
I did it all for the nookie
Come on
The nookie
Come on
So you can take that cookie
for an empty line And Stick it up your, yeah!
Stick it up your, yeah!
Monthly Shitty Poetry Battle
Check the wiki for all the info, links & standings
Discord
/r/ShittyPoetry
I was supposed to be your last meal.
I guess I spoiled too fast
Or I just wasn’t appetizing anymore.
I’m glad you’re not starving.
Understand being made into a freak will have you seek the depths of ones decete. They try and repeat the tales of your defeats as gospel in streets: all while I sit ignorant, and eat. Living as an aborrent being I find meaning in someone who struggles with feinding, its like a gleaming star about to die screaming "why didn't I bump that ultra light beemin? Just memein, I'd rather be alive, than dreamin." The star will eventually fail just like you makein bail, Dayle; and just as he, you'll be trapped forever in a cell with no one to tell about your life in this Hel.
Your Love is a gun
But I'm suicidal
Exercise is torture
But I'm massicistic
Eating Right is rat poison
But I have an infestation
Self Care is black tar heroin
And I'm a massive junky
Today I took a testosterone booster
Decrepit, old me. I want to be virile. I want to get ripped. I want you to want me. But I don't want you back. Because you'll just take my money.
Anyway, I think it's working. I got a white head pimple, like a goddamn teenager, 3 hrs after ingesting the pill. But I'm dehydrated and over the hill. Time to get jacked, I said to Jill.
Swole is the goal. Taurine and L-Carnitine. Creatine, and protein. Shake and bake. Whatever it takes. How long before my first heart attack?
written: 7/13/24 8:44am
floating back in forth between my ears
the echo of thoughts is never-ending
how can I be forced to endure the constant assault of words that breached my head
letters I've read on a glowing page, sentences whispered from an acquaintance
now these things have free rent in my mind, & continue to cycle through even though I do not latch
but how many times can a bug fly past your face before you're swatting back?
I've endured so much from words outside of my head
don't take my body as your own, the only sanctuary I truly have
well, had...
cause the outside has found the draft
and words I never wished to know the weight of come whistling in
thrashing back and forth against my psyche
prepped for a reaction and forced to hold calm
I finally have the right to reject untrue things said to maim me...
and I have to let it go
and take everything I requested to never experience
As she fell - Dead - the Crone -
Nitpicked her kitchen - One fixture -
Shy of perfection -
Twenty ankle-biters yapping -
Like a choir of angels -
only a high-strung
histrionic child
thinks words are violence
and silence
is simultaneously violence
and that free expression
is power
and that the social contract of rules
is oppression
get off your dumb hobby
horse, children
embrace true freedom
set a standard
fuck, fuck a lot
when it's your turn for words
shut your face
have a fuck instead
fuck to make
a fucker proud, penetration
take cock
take pussy
shit on your partner's chest
shit on both your
partners' chests
fucking is among adults
the sticky yellow strings
of key lime pie
eaten out of your viejo's asshole
the opium of the missus
let go of what will be
unburden yourself of what has been
and now, Ladies and Gentlemen,
President Free Speech's
glassy gaze
Green hills,rocky valley and a small steamer front of my house.
4 yellow ducks, 2 sons and 2 dads
Where is the moms?
They all quack at me for being nosey in their lives.
Also wanting the muffin in my hand.
So I threw the muffin at them and ran inside house, I am deathly scared of them.
I was bitten as a kid by one of them.
Maybe one of the dads here .
End.
I have swam in two oceans and strode the shores of southern seas, and walked beneath forest boughs both short and tall, on jagged peaks and in deep valleys.
I have seen mountain vaults of megalophobic scale and traversed the endless plains where golden grass grows in place of primordial waters, there between horizons.
I have walked in the valley of death and bore witness to the wrath of ancient gods in the scars the land still holds, and I have seen from the peaks of mountains silver seas transubstantiated in flaming gold.
I have stood in storms and hurricanes, and watched the curtains of night turn black the light of day, and I have braved the test of ice and wind, and more beside than I can say.
I have watched the sun rise in the east above the waters and I have watched it set in the west below the waters, and I have slept under stars and walked by moonlight, and gathered round the flames that banish night.
And all throughout I never cared to mark the names of places already there, of wonders seen by creek and tree, and mighty rivers to the sea, on barren sands and fertile soil, and bare across the stone of earth, o’er misted mountains and canyons deep, to see at last what might be there, beyond the horizon, to anywhere.
And yet they say I have hardly seen a thing, for I am an American and have never left my homeland. More pity them, to have homes so small with paltry wonders.
People do not understand that development and modernization have a price
Giving up plastic bags is not going to meet that price
it's just going to make our burning planet look that much more nice
The energy tax of creating paper bags so far outweighs plastic
that, even considering their permanence,
plastic is more plausible answer
The push against plastic has largely been driven
by the governments position
on reducing reliance on imported competition
China produces 30% of the worlds plastic
That's a statistic as close to a fact
as I've seen
It's never been
about saving the planet
you can't eat your cake
and have it
If you truly felt the desire to save
and can't ask yourself Camus' serious question
then the second best way
is violence
violence against houses
violence against factories
violence against guilds
all things human are the enemy
destroy the houses
destroy the factories
destroy the guilds
and the enemies
and the bread lines
and the art
and the state
and the music
and the hope
Violence against everything that is the human spirit
And that is the second best way to save the planet
If the cost of this planet is violence
then I do not want to save it
I love this planet
but this planet will, one day, die
One day, the sun will die too
Another day, all of the sky will vanish
One day, all of this will be nothing but one day
I want to believe the human spirit can pass that day
I want to believe in the most beautiful aspects of humanity
I want to believe those aspects will persist into infinity
I want to believe I can pass that day
I want to believe that my spirit will see the last stars
And I want the human spirit with me.
But I think, to do this, I have to give up the thing I find most beautiful about myself
I have to take myself apart
so I can stand next to myself
while two spirits see those last stars.
to save this planet
i have to take myself apart
and I am unwilling to do so.
It haunts me to know
that I know violence is the second best way to save the planet
and I lose sleep over the terribleness of war
and the hatred you can sell
and the hatred you can store
and i see it happening everywhere
and i know what i know is nothing
there is so much i ignore
and i can knock on this door
to my soul
till i feel it down
in my bones
and my core
but i still know
that i know
what i know
I wear the jewelry of an antiquated love;
Still, the ardent heat of adornment,
Tempered just young from near ago
Forge-flame. The peal, orange-red, but fades.
Why must I trim with the unpossessed
Beyond recuperative promise?
"Why," you ask?
So that it, they, that and them are all but lost;
All, but forgot. Though, forgetten I have!
In-mood (O Belonged!), chief of my bod' had forgotten!
Unfaulted—
Keepsakes! What episodic tokens you
flick memento-fevers of,
You lost and seasoned souvenir!
They entailed my fail-safe skeleton-key: You (flicker):
Excepted and brandished on my dirty hip (flicker),
Supposed unexceptional. The key broke.
Now I can't forget. I wear your rosary,
Wear your flower, wear your resolve
For me on myself,
Once as your bed as your bed is empty.
Still, I brandish you
Otherwise to stave me
Off my musings
Of brooded flashpoints
And repudiated self-love
For my own intrusive company
Inviting itself in
Your life.
And, my head is clearer.
And, my head is clearer.
I don your flashbacks;
And, my head is clearer.
~ E.M.
Edit: fixing the format/let me figure it out Edit 2: got it Edit 3: idk how to add a hanging Whitman space to my run-on lines, but there should be a couple of those "quintuple" Whitman spaces in this.
r/ShittyPoetry
A covert cult of quality
Though they claim to like it bad
Make it worse - they get mad
But r/CrackHousePoetry
Likes it bad as bad can be!!
rosses are red
violence au jus
in our complexity
we stew and stew
I bought myself many a game,
But I don't have enough time to play 'm!
It started when they-all
Were listed on sale.
These games keep me up till 3 a.m.
Does it slam?
Does it rhyme?
Does it have extra rhythm?
Can you write it?
Can you recite it?
Even if you're not all with it?
Will it make you feel?
Would that break the deal:
If I think a poem is just exactly only what's in it?
the house of crack
awaits of those
whose recalcitrance grows. . .
is your 12th step on track?
have you picked apart
the rug yet, son,
to look for crack?
(. . .yet end up smoking parmesan?)
creativity is not lack of constraint,
it is performance within constraint.
one must have respect for constraint,
just a few simple rules establish constraint.
they scream, they yell.
with such sophistry they tell me
that Formatting is Fascism
has reason now fully flown, son?
just what kind of crack you on?
try on a challenge or two
push yourself to excellence.
there's no mystery here
this subreddit is a complete disaster
and the rules are clear
the rules, the rules
like crystal they are clear.
ink a tattoo
of Rule 1 and Rule 2
take a position, too
have an opinion,
have a backbone, take a stand.
Make Formatting Great Again.
An Art-thoritarian rules what we jot
Declares what a bad poem is
And is not - Not to be rude
Mr. Sir or Ms - Who are you to say
What bad poetry is!?!?
You are the love of my life, I was your occasional Saturday night
I've been left behind, hurting when you never wanted me beyond Sunday morning
How can this be? How could I be so naive?
I believed what you said that December, about wanting to do and be better
Why did I believe you would? Just because you said you could? Or did I believe you could just because you said you would?
Now something seems so much colder about those lies spoken in December
We were still so new but even then I knew I was in love with you, you said you felt it, too
You said you wanted to do things right and we never even had a fight …
So how can I forget the night you put your hand over my heart and pushed me out of your life?
You said I'd done no wrong and asked me please, just move on
I can honestly tell you that I've tried, for over 16 months I've tried. I've written, I've grown, I've begged and pleaded and oh how I've cried.
Now I still write but I don't grow. I can't move on, there's nowhere to go, no place to take my lonesome soul
I still beg and I still plead but really I just hope to breathe
And I still cry, oh how I cry … but I'll be honest, I no longer try
You are my golden sun, my silver moon and there is no getting over you
A man grown,A groan he ails,Drunk too many ales,Pale, after a pail.
Since eight, cents paid,He ate.Then, in the air,A thing not fair,
A whisper, from the heir:“That hare, by the fir,Has no hair,But fur
often walking
down a sloping street
the latching gaze
of the passerby
requires the succulent approbation
that only a big fat wiener can provide
a big fat wiener with mustard
for everything else, there's mastercard
I’ve often wondered why a man burns a cigarette. Is it the touch of burning tobacco? Or is it the rush of burning ones soul? The buzz of nicotine, the knowledge that it’s killing him? Perhaps it’s a third thing, hidden in the smoke.
I think it’s her, sitting next to him. Her eyes, her stories, her smile. The way she inhales, the way he watches. The smoke billows from her lips, the grin slides across his face. He can’t say it. He never will. But that cigarette isn’t a vice, it isn’t a sin. It’s a lie spun in smoke, an excuse to sit with her.
Why does a man smoke a cigarette? To sit with a dark haired angel that would never sit with him.
bring me your tired, your poor
old shitty poetry yearning to break free
and format it (or add an exculpatory flair that will retain your creative license)
shitty poetry is important
I wish people were as pretty as pictures made us be.
I wish this wasn’t such a miserable reality.
I wish there was something other than drugs to bend the need
I wish there was a way for me to find what is actually pretty
I open my eyes and as far as the eyes can see
Endless skyscrapers and a smog covering this entire city
I’d go anywhere if I could give me some peace of mind
i can’t leave the memory of what I’ve left behind
And if I could erase the past I wonder what would I find,
Not let my past mistakes paint my reality im blind,
To what this world has to offer for all I see is crime,
Wherever there’s people there’s pollution in time.
Yet I await the hope someday love can win
I’ve seen love blind prejudices and judgement
It can create and topple cities brought to ruin
I hate how it’s the only thing I’ve believed in.
I wish people were as pretty as books made life to be,
I wish storybooks were more common and not tragedy,
As far as I look I see money making schemes
This world robs most from what is, and should be.
Dear r/ShittyPoetry poets,
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Happy formatting!
-- u/sedmonster
It was but for a moment that the world was truly mine,
silence swallowing the alley of Shriver as a crow circled the gray skin in the sky.
I wanted to borrow its wings; I wanted to Fly.
It was but a moment I felt needed documenting, I don’t know why.
Grenchamreborn and sedmonster,
Sitting in a tree,
How can we steal /r/shittypoetry?
First comes rules,
Then comes bans,
Then we offer them a different plan
/R/crackhousepoetry,
From this was born,
A new promised land,
To those who were torn
Why do this, you ask?
Intentions are clear,
They want to get more traffic here
But this sub is too quiet,
And has been for so long,
Maybe a new one can fix what's wrong
So they work as a team,
To steal the sub,
Oceans 11,
In your own bathtub
Everyday becoming every hour
undoing every min
to become seconds.
This thing we call time
is sparse,
every expression we make
is made false,
When you decide
to control the way we relay
expression,
And this art we enjoy
is already dying,
and i formatted this
annoyed that i wasted
time even trying.
Because seconds become mins
mins evolve to hours
advancing only by becoming minuscule
when compared to decades and centuries.
And advancing to become minuscule,
with time
This Sub Reddit,
We are, i am
lost to time.
(because of formatting)
Take a hike, my fruity lover
You promised to eat fruit only
Now gather your things, and leave!
Saw you with a red tomato
-- A vegetable, I believe. . . !
But if I am mistaken, tomatoes
Somehow are fruit
Then, indeed, my sincere apologies
For showing you the boot!
I didn't think I'd be here again ••• Choking on love's gaze ••• Everything fit so perfectly ••• I didn't think of the end, I couldn't see one ••• But in the nights after leisure ••• Sinful euphoria & drive ••• The same evil descends, & I cannot get you to run for cover ••• You say you can hold out, that it's nothing to your control ••• But I see it ••• Corrupt you ••• I denied it for so long cause the love censored my view ••• I couldn't bear to see pain ••• So I always allowed you to get your way ••• I enabled you, I'm afraid ••• It was lonely in heaven, I wanted a companion I could love ••• But what is my love worth when it comes with that which consumes you ••• I'll make you feel loved, don't question that ••• But will you be able to reciprocate? When my sin infects your heart? ••• Will you be able to come down? Even if I hold the ladder? ••• I did the best I could do ••• But I support not control you ••• Please just live your life, fully, you're not allowed to cut it short ••• I'll be there when you fall, people like us always do ••• But unlike me you'll have someone to pick you up ••• Someone you can actually count on to be there ••• It's my guilt to pay but regardless I'll be there ••• Two tours alone, lost in and out of my head ••• I'll never let you fall there ••• Just to be safe, I'll never let you go •••
I put the octopus at the drain
I watch it fight
against the current, it tries
with all its might
I drop the jellyfish in the water
I watch it swim
closer to the drain, I see
it torn limb from limb
I plop the seahorse in the fluid
I watch it flow
directly down the drain, it swirls
right down below
I skim the squid near the drain
I watch it sink
I am clean now, I believe
or so I think