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Here, finally is the last chunk of my revised Thor: Ragnarok. Latest in a series in which I tweak the MCU and various Marvel adaptations to fit one consistent universe.
Before we proceed, a list of past entries for those who want either an intro or a recap.
Thanks for your patience, as always.
And enjoy!
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The Serpent
While Thor remains a mighty warrior in his own right, the apparent loss of his lightning powers and connection to the Odinforce leave Cul the stronger of the two.
Disarming Thor after a brutal melee, Cul scolds Thor for letting the humans of Midgard rob him of his potential. In another life, had Thor not grown so soft, Cul would have gladly taken him on as a successor.
But he made his choice. And now he will die for it.
Cul punctuates his point by striking Thor in the face, burning out one of his eyes.
Thor is cast from the throne room, plummeting to the courtyard outside the palace. Cul follows, landing close to where Hela has cornered her father and the "false king" Odin.
Cul orders the goddess to finish them, and then the rest of Asgard's defenders. But he's met with hesitance, as Loki stands his ground.
Loki's Surrender
The trickster god remains planted in front of his daughter.
Mockingly, she asks if he thinks he can defend any of these people from her. To her surprise, Loki says he isn't protecting them.
He's protecting Hela.
As the Valkyries and their captain start to lead Odin away, Loki falls to his knees in front of Hela, removing his helmet and dropping his weapons. Apologizing to her, Loki admits his remorse for having abandoned his daughter in Hel for the sake of power.
He says he's unworthy of being a king, or a father. He doesn't ask for Hela's forgiveness, believing he doesn't deserve that either.
Loki only asks one thing of Hela, and that is to spare Odin and the people of Asgard. His crimes already brought ruin and death upon them once, and it cost him the only person who still believed in him.
Loki offers his life for Asgard's, if that will satisfy Hela's fury. But if she can find it in herself to show mercy, and not waste her life for revenge and ambition like he did, Loki will feel pride as a father. Just as Odin once did for him.
Hela, having never expected her father to show an ounce of humility, or grace for those he so scorned in the past, doesn't know what to do.
Odin smile proudly. While Cul, for his part, is enraged.
Cul berates Hela for her hesitation, ordering her to stop playing "daddy's little girl" and kill them all. When Loki speaks kindly to her again, Cul only answers with further insults and browbeating which remind her and Loki of the cruel despot who lorded over them both, far beyond the stars.
When Cul is ready to lash out at her too, he's interrupted by Thor, who tackles the tyrant and pulls him away from his family.
God of Thunder
Despite Thor's best efforts, he is still overpowered by his vicious uncle.
Until, of course, Odin keys into his immense (albeit dwindling) power and speaks to his son, offering him comfort and courage.
But here, as opposed to the film we got, Thor truly does turn the tide of battle against his enemy, and Cul finally meets his match in battle. Thor presses the advantage until Cul abandons fighting his nephew head on.
A desperate Cul tries to sic more undead and serpents on his nephew.
Only for the undead to fall, dispelled by a spiteful Hela.
Seething in anger and humiliation, Cul decides if he won't claim Asgard, none of them will. Summoning a Níðhöggr, he pulls one last deadly trick.
The awakening of the imprisoned Surtr, who is further empowered by the Eternal Flame.
Asgard is a People
As Surtr begins to raze Asgard in his fury, Thor and friends are at a loss. Even if they should defeat Cul, there's little hope of stopping the fire giant without further loss...
Until Odin decides to remain behind. He has not recovered his full strength yet, so he cannot subdue Surtr. But he can buy his sons and their people precious minutes with which to use the Bifrost one last time, and flee Asgard.
Thor is faced with a choice.
Thor's warrior spirit isn't broken yet, rather emboldened by his newfound power and overcoming his uncle. He might just stand a small chance to destroy his foes once and for all, and die gloriously if it means the realm is saved. Moreover he's still hesitant to leave his home after all they've suffered, all they've lost.
But Odin repeats his kernel of wisdom from before, reminding Thor of his first and foremost duty.
"Asgard isn't a place..."
"It's a people."
Odin says a bittersweet goodbye to the princes. Feeling nothing but pride for the men they've become and the legacy he leaves behind in them.
Elements of Odin's farewell from the film we got remain here.
Swallowing his pride, and his grief for one last loss yet to come, Odin leads Loki and the others to the Bifrost. Hela is the only one not to follow, instead staying behind to carry Odin's soul onward when his time comes.
But not to her realm.
The Allfather marches to his end, holding Cul close in an almost brotherly embrace as the tyrant panics. Odin whispers to Thor and Loki one final time, as Thor activates the Bifrost.
"I love you, my sons."
And then in a flash, Surtr plunges his flaming sword into the heart of the Realm Eternal, igniting the planet's core.
Fire engulfs the kingdom, staved off for a precious few seconds by the Odinforce. Long enough for the Odinsons to vanish, unharmed, lightyears away.
King Thor
The escapees of Ragnarok return to Sakaar. There, Hulk provides them with lodging and comfort. But the melancholy that comes with losing a home isn't so easily washed away.
Hulk talks to Thor, ruler to ruler, promising he'll help however he can. Though he has a heavy heart, Thor knows he and Hulk won’t have much time to grieve.
Stories are coming from Earth, stories of chaos and division. The people of Midgard require the aid of Asgard once more. Despite his disillusionment in the aftermath of the Ultron crisis, Thor can't sit by idly and ignore his friends' plight forever.
Before they leave, however, Thor has to "make it official".
In private, he speaks with Loki, the two visibly worn down and forever changed by what's transpired the past few years. Though many unspoken issues remain between them, the Odinsons are in this together again.
The scene follows up on the gradual reunion from Planet Hulk, while also paying off a key moment from their first film.
For a second time, Thor lets his guard down altogether and asks Loki if he's ready. And Loki affirms he is.
"So... how do I look?"
"Like a king."
On a starship bound for Earth, Thor's friends watch as he ascends to a makeshift throne.
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The post-credits sequence picks up amidst the shattered remains of Asgard, as they float through space.
A monstrous spaceship surveys the destruction, before its crew determine the whereabouts of the Asgardian refugees.
At its head, the warlord whose plans saw to the invasion of Earth, the corruption of Loki, and the hunt for the Infinity Stones perceives that his time has come at last. The Realm Eternal, Asgard, has fallen. Just like Xandar.
Bearing the Power Stone already, he makes for Sakaar, to claim the Space Stone and enact his final plan. There is no one to stand in his way now.
Destiny is here.
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And there we go.
Phase 3 of my revised MCU is complete, save for the grand two-part finale.
Hope you liked this redo of Thor: Ragnarok. I had a good time writing it all out.
Keep a look out for the next part of my fan's expansion/redux on Man of Steel this next weekend, as I prepare the climax to this grand MCU reimagining.
Until next time!
Director: David Ayer
Runtime: 1hr 47m
Rating: R
Lex Luthor (Nicolas Hoult), a rising corporate and political figure, is recruited by Amanda Waller and A.R.G.U.S. to create a covert black-ops team to neutralize high-risk threats. However, Lex sees this as an opportunity to seize power himself.
Operating in Gotham, he enlists Slade Wilson (Gerard Butler) and Bane (Laz Alonso) with the promise of wealth, power, and protection from prosecution. He then recruits Giganta (Laverne Cox), Dwarfstar (Andrew J. West), Crimson Dawn (Erin Moriarty), and Man-Bat (voiced by Michael Rooker), forming his Secret Six.
Under the guise of government-sanctioned missions, Lex uses the team to attack A.R.G.U.S., LordTech, and metahuman allies of the Justice League, eliminating those who could oppose his rise. They infiltrate A.R.G.U.S. HQ, assassinate key officials, and take Amanda Waller hostage. Using A.R.G.U.S. networks, Lex broadcasts classified documents exposing Waller’s secret experiments on metahumans, triggering nationwide riots.
But the chaos is just a distraction—Lex has a greater goal: the complete takeover of the U.S. government. While the nation descends into turmoil, his private army of mercenaries, equipped with kryptonite-laced and anti-metahuman weaponry, launches attacks on Superman, Batman, Green Lantern, Hawkgirl, and others. His ultimate plan? Overthrow the government, declare himself Chancellor, and enslave metahumans as living weapons under his control.
Slade Wilson, initially just in it for the money, realizes he’s been used. Seeing the destruction across the country, he and Bane free Waller and turn against Lex. A brutal battle erupts between Slade’s faction and Lex’s loyalists. Crimson Dawn and Dwarfstar are killed in the crossfire, revealing Lex's true ruthlessness.
Lex retreats to The White House, where his forces storm the building, executing officials who refuse to submit. Man-Bat evacuates the President and key figures while Slade, Giganta, and Bane carve through Lex’s elite guards. Just as Lex prepares to declare his new regime, Superman, Batman, Waller, and the Justice League arrive to shut him down.
Final Confrontation:
Lex, donning an advanced LexCorp combat suit, takes on Superman but is ultimately defeated. As his empire collapses, he is taken into custody, though he cryptically hints at "a greater plan already in motion."
In the aftermath, Waller personally oversees the arrests of Slade, Bane, and Giganta. Instead of sending Slade to Arkham, she makes him an offer: "I need someone to clean up the messes before they start. Be my suppressor."
Post-Credit Scene:
As Slade contemplates his next move, we cut to a secret facility where Project OMAC is being activated—Lex’s true contingency plan against metahumans, ensuring that even in defeat, his war is far from over
You need to have
-Spider-Man PS4
-Spider-Man Miles Morales
-Can tweak Spider Man 2 but mostly keep it
-A Midnight Suns Game
-A Wolverine Game
-An Iron Man Game
-Marvel 1943: Rise of HYDRA
-The big project should be an Avengers Game, and with yes, AIM as its villain.
Some ground rules:
This is still a hard reboot of the character, meaning no Andrew as MCU Spidey.
Keep the same cast, like Holland, Zendaya, Batalon, and the others, meaning recasts would only be necessary if needed.
The SSU can still happen, however it should be the TASMverse instead.
Peter’s lesson shouldn’t be that with great power he must also have great responsibility, but MORE about what does being responsible MEAN.
We keep Uncle Ben’s death, and that part, but how he’ll react to it should be unique with The MCU.
In Homecoming, he’ll want to become an Avenger because Peter believes it’s “the responsible thing” to do. This is going to be egged on by Tony to a degree. Even though he’ll tell him he’s doing what he’s told or else he won’t become an Avenger.
In Far From Home, he’ll be obsessed with being Iron Man believing it’s “the responsible thing to do” and wanting to honor Tony, and we use this pattern to run a new path with this Peter.
In No Way Home, he’s at his most broken, not knowing what to do, not knowing what “the responsible thing to do” is.
May’s last line is going to be this
“You told me Ben told you that you had a great responsibility, and it isn’t hard to do the responsible thing as you believe. Do the right thing, and be there for those who cannot.”
And that’s what he’ll do rest of No Way Home, inspired by May, Tobey, and Andrew.
Crossbones is definitely one. Ronan maybe too.
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What movie order is best to watch?
My idea was WandaVision she'll become bad, and MOM will end with her getting sucked into The Quantum Realm, leading to her killing Scott and escaping, her real point of no return, and ending with her doing Secret Wars.
Full transparency, I loved Watch Dogs 2, and I would have loved to see more of those characters, but protagonist switching apparently was a part of the franchise and so I was open to the play as anyone feature, where you can recruit and play as anyone in the city to rally against the evil Big Brother corporation. I wasn't excited, I didn't get what was going to be special about it and it turned out, there wasn't a whole lot special about it, outside of how hard it was to do, but as I played, I started to see what they were going for and why they didn't hit the mark.
The main problem was that all the characters were essentially the same. They all hacked, they all fought, they all drove, more or less the same. Even the hacking and gadget skill tree was the same for all, as if all the characters were just one big character you were leveling up. Some had perks you could use, but beyond that... not much. The Secret Agent archetype's car had rocket launchers, stuff like that, that was cool for a couple minutes, but didn't really build into the story and narrative.
This problem was further underlined by the idea that characters did have lives and relationships before you recruited them, but once on the team they all had the same kind of lines and became nothing but weaker versions of Marcus or Aiden. They became less human, less like characters when you needed them most.
Also the game was a little glitchy here and there, as if corners had been cut on tech.
So here's how I'd fix it.
1) Use a Roguelike framework, where you don't level up characters, or the faction, so much as you level up your access to characters over time, you level your party. In Legion, your Dedsec can start with three rando losers, and no one reputable would even think about joining you, but as you complete mission and build up, you get attention and belief and standing which allows you to recruit people with more skills, perks and access. At the beginning no Bad Guys would join you making accessing those places nigh impossible, but halfway through you can even get high level Bad Guys to join you if you work hard, giving access to more objectives. More people translate to extra lives and more abilities, and more diverse abilities (hitmen, agents, drone experts, etc, like in the actual game). Not everyone can do everything. Some people can't drive, some people can't shoot, some people can't even hack, but everyone has a role to play. And some have multiple roles and are better at them. The old lady draws less suspicion. The businessman has more money to spend (or maybe a multiplier/discount). Characters who have been around a while have grown their Dedsec networks and can recruit easier, and if you've been using them, they've leveled up their skills too.
2) Have companion AI and character switching within a single mission. Because everyone has a role to play, now you may need more than one operative on a mission, so now you're deciding how many people to risk for every objective, and you can switch between them to complete things, just like you'd switch between your character and your drones. Would require the AI be solid and forgiving. Would also make for fun gameplay trying to free/rescue teammates that have been caught and captured. You can also do things like have minor missions that you commit members of your team to that leave them busy for minutes at a time (I think the game had this already) to level them and earn resources.
3) Every character has their own personal side mission. To keep characters a character, they have relationships or check ins that give them boosts by still being connected to their old life. These can come with both risks and rewards, and it kind of systematizes being human in a way down to a simple meter, but that diversifies characters and gives them something to chime in on other than the mission. Visit aging mother. Work their job that functions as their cover. Busk for money. No need for new gameplay, keep it simple. Having multiple side missions or required side missions could be a liability for more amazing characters.
4) The Faction leveling should form a cap, not the floor. That is, the faction still gains access to new hacks and devices and vehicles and etc that are available to the Dedsec characters, but the characters have to be able to use them, they have to have the right skill. Old grandpa can't just get in the rocket car and shoot rockets accurately. So you're still building up the organization, but you're managing different advancement while managing your roster, like a sports game almost, you're playing as the franchise, but you naturally have favorite players, but then you could lose those.
5) Use two different vectors to create character archetypes to run dialogue options. What I mean is, you already have classes/archetypes that can create unique dialogue options based on their access and skills. Combine that with relationship classes or quirk classes to add to their dialogue and now you have the feeling of a full cast of characters. If there's 10 relationship quirks, and 10 archetypes you have 100 different feeling characters! You could even use this in cutscenes, where you can have specific dialogue written and the scene can just automatically slot in your highest two Bad Guy faction members, most lethal character, the character that complete the last mission, and anyone who has an entertainment job so that they all chime in on things that make sense for them to say, if not not, a generic person says it, cuz hey, they might know. Now you have characters with relationships that we can be invested in.
6) Handle the leak without changing the source code too much. It's hard to talk about the tech side without seeing how things went down, but one thing that I suspect had a huge effect on the game's development was the source code leaking. This is a problem because it makes the multiplayer EXTREMELY vulnerable. My thought would be to just let the multiplayer go and leave it to mods, and create a modding community around the game. Unorthodox for Ubisoft but its worked for Rockstar. Once you've got a system of catching hackers in the act, you can do your own WatchDogs Legion Online and what not. But taking time and changing the core gameplay to be different from your original working source code, if that's what happened, is a much worse result, and takes away from the development of a good game to make sure that multiplayer is stable in the result getting neither.
So those are my thoughts, let me know what you think!
This is more aligned to The CW-Version, which I grew up with, but you can pretty much apply this to any version. I think that we've been in a crossroad, we're we have an Eobard Thawne who's not a sympathetic villain, as he'd be making those crimes that he prevented; or a Thawne with a pathetic motivation, like CW does, where he was not praised for stopping a crime because The Flash did anyway.
I think there's room to do this better, to make a Thawne who has a better reason to hate Barry, but not to make it where Barry is at fault either. Barry obviously will make a mistake, but he has to make a mistake that we can defend, not one we can really resent him for. He has to do a thing not right, but we have to make it where we're able to sympathize with Thawne as well, and get to understand why he's doing this.
Here's what I'd do. Barry goes to the future, chasing down Reverse Flash, and will end up in that year which Eobard lives in. Eobard, who's The Future Flash, will run up to him. He'll talk about how he's become a hero to be like him, about how he's helped people, and will just begin to talk on and on. Barry doesn't respond, not knowing what to do.
He'll know that Thawne idolized him, as he's learned that already, but believes this could be a trick, and that if Thawne is genuine and is a good guy in the future, he should be left to his own devices. It's better if he doesn't know, if he doesn't have a person to hate. If he doesn't want to hurt people, but is kept wanting to help them. Thawne, meanwhile, is just being stared at and studied intensely. He's confused.
Barry makes a tough decision, he chooses to run away, to go back to his time, to not risk having a real mistake happen. Thawne's confused, angry, and will want to know how The Flash could have done that, and so he goes on an aggressive search for information, interrogating people throughout Time and The Multiverse, wanting an answer, and becoming more broken overtime, and making his Yellow Suit, and making his own Negative Speed Force. Only his hatred and pain because The Flash abandoning him could get him through this journey. The Speed Force wasn't enough.
He'll eventually find a person that will know the truth, a historian, who's obsessed with The Flash, and Thawne will realize what he's becoming, and in denial and rage, kill this person. Only for him to see that he's become what he didn't want to be. He is The Reverse Flash, he cannot deny that now, and he hates The Flash for running away and abandoning him to his destiny.
The Flash abandoned me to my destiny, and now I will bring that destiny upon him. He will get what he deserves for his sin of running away.
Based in an answer i was writing for a post gere I thought I could give it a chance to rewrtie the Ant-Man movie with the challenge of keeping it as close to the trailer released for it.
In this rewrite I wanted to use this movie to introduce kang the same way the first Guardians of the Galaxy did with Thanos, by keeping him just as a misterous plot device with no further influence in the story. This time the villains would be a fan favorite that is the AIM organization. Also I tried to keep some MCU changes that I think they're good but badly underused or ridiculous.
First I would keep MODOK origin like the movie with Darren Cross but I would make some small changes. I would change MODOK's attitude from the dumb comedic character that uncomfortably smiles like he's on high meds to the more classic egotistical, angry and dumb comedic character. Make him have tantrums, be angry at everything and hating ant-man with his guts. I would not make him a giant, clean head of Darren, maybe add some details like the white eyes and the ugly face.
Next I would take it as a good opportunity to introduce Monica and AIM to the formula. And the new plot would go like this:
AIM was an ultra-advanced company in the 60's leaded by monica and secretly financed by Hydra that tried to replicate the technology of Howard Stark and Hank Pym . After a really messed up experiment with stolen pym particles the whole AIM building gets transported into the quantum world along with Monica and AIM personnel. AIM would then, use the quantum world as their area of operations and would kidnap random people around the real world to use them as experiments or turn them into mindless mechanical drones.
After the events of antman 1, Darren would be horribly transported to the quantum world along with horrible mutations that fused him with the yellow jacket suit giving him a computerized mind and access to many tools. He would be captured by AIM, and treated as another experiment. But he would be able to gain influence in the company practically entering conflict with Monica and fragmenting the company.
Both MODOK and Monica would enter in war since they want to open a mysterious vault that is said to contain unlimited power. Here enters the original wasp who would be helping kidnapped test subjects find a way to escape creating some sort of "community" on the hidden parts of AIM territory.
Monica finds out about Ant-Man and all the avengers did in IW so decides to bring all of them to the quantum world, but they end up in random places with Hank and Katie falling on MODOK side and Scott and the new Wasp ending at Monica's.
The plot would go with MODOK and Monica using the Ant-Man and his family to open the vault first, with scott planning a way to escape. The movie goes on... Scott and katie have a final confrontation with MODOK, Hank Pym makes a last sacrifice, and both the new Wasp and the original one fight Monica.
Almost at the end the mysterious vault opens... Only to reveal that Kang was inside of it all along, imprisoned by his variants. Here, he makes a showcase of his power by defeating the whole ant-family and the AIM soldiers by just standing still and practically transports the whole AIM territory to the real world causing a disaster. Monica apparently "dies" off screen and MODOK flies away to an unknown place, at this point Kang opens up a portal and leaves. The movie ends with the city in ruins.
A post-credit scene is shown with the council of kangs (and the main variants) with horror running from one place to another preparing themselves for war.
This is the first time I try something like this but any correction or possible loophole is welcome.
Golden Calves.
Imagine if we got a live-action, science fiction kaiju film that took influence from Jurassic Park…
What if we used science to create living myths? What if we became so scientifically advanced that we were able to create gods and other mythological creatures for us to venerate, making our dreams and desires to find meaning in a cold, uncaring universe come true? What if we were able to make our dreams come true?
What if we were able to create our own idols, or living golden calves?
I was recently rewriting/adding to DMC stories on the DMC subreddit and while I could post them all here, there was one specific fix to 5 I wanted to share here.
DMC5 has a sound first half, but what I reckon I would do is establish that Urizen acquired his status as Demon King from the remains of Mundus after what happened to the latter in DMC1. At this point, Mundus is still sealed away, but Urizen has him fixated on the Qliphoth, taunting him for being so "pathetic" as to let him take his power. As the Qliphoth grows, he would gradually lose control of Mundus as the game goes on.
The final battle, as cool as it is, is ultimately low stakes so with our re-established Mundus in this story comes the most critical change: have the Dante vs. Vergil fight in the same mission as Nero vs. Vergil and have Mission 20 be a rematch against a more powerful blob Mundus.
With Urizen no longer having control over Mundus, the latter slowly breaks out of the Qliphoth roots over the course of the missions after Vergil comes back. The remade Mission 20 would be somewhat reminiscent of DmC's Mundus fight and have you switching between Dante, Vergil, and Nero as Mundus tries to power the Qliphoth and annihilate the humans. All three characters could continuously power up to use their Devil Triggers/Sin Devil Triggers against the former Demon King in his desperate attempts to reform and rule again -- maybe give him a moment where he tries to pull the Qliphoth fruit out of Vergil. Heck, we could have Trish's lightning power them up further as a fun callback to the finale of DMC1.
Ultimately, however, all three Spardas would "Jackpot" Mundus to death, destroying the Demon Emperor for good. With all that power exertion, however, at least Dante and Vergil would be weakened though they could easily do what they did in the original ending by going to hell to cut down the tree. While my DMC2 rewrite explained how Dante could return from hell, if they were to end the series for good right here, I'd let them.
Any feedback from fans or enjoyers would be appreciated!
I think he should have an Ant-Man Movie let him win and kill Scott and Young Avengers.
Have a montage shown as the intro where Lightning wins all his four Piston Cups instead of just telling us he did it.
Explain how Doc died.
Remove the spy plot and instead focus purely on WGP. Have one race on each continent.
Lightning and Mater could still have their falling out. Mater does something that screws Lightning over by being himself so he looses the first race and have Lightning overreact but have Mater actually learn something valuable from it. He could get sad, travel the world on his own and be involved in stuff which changes him to take stuff more seriously and be more serious as a person sometimes when he’s not at home. He comes back to the last race and redeems himself by helping Lightning winning it. Lightning meanwhile gets upset at himself for being too hard on Mater and learns that it's important to hold onto friendships, especially your best friend.
Francesco eventually feels symphaty for Lightning because he showed many of his old friends away because they also were annoying but he misses them every day because they also had very good sides to them. This makes Lightning truly understand the good sides of Mater and also eases up Francesco and Lightning's rivalry.
Have the rest of the Radiator Springs gang accompany them on their journey because they are very sidelined in the original movie. They closes Radiator Springs and puts up a sign saying they are on a holiday. Sally helps Lightning realizing how much Mater means to him and how much he means to Mater, they also go on romantic dates and explore stuff outside of the races. Also the rest of the Radiator Springs gang interracts with other cars, perhaps they meet some who do the same stuff they do. Ramone for example meets another grafitti painter and they have a fight about how a car is the best painted while Sheriff meets another sheriff and they have totally different views on the law.
Instead of doing what he’s doing to spite Pym, he’s doing this to make Hank Pym better, and to make him use his Pym Particles to do good, to protect people, and not just to be this big secret that people don’t get.
He’s attempting to make him a better person who is willing to do what is right. He’ll hate Scott because Hank is using him as a pawn to protect what he loves, and is disgusted by him and what he’s being used to do.
This makes Darren a person who’s goal is too motivate his “mentor” to do what’s right and get up and help people and not let his Formula die with him.
It’s going to be, “I’m going to give it to people good and bad, or you’re going to use it to do something good.” He’s attempting to get Hank Pym to be a better person.
He’s also hypocritical, as he’s doing what Hank is, only attempting to help people that he loves and deep down he loves being Rich, this is just a bad mechanism to deal with this.
And add to his background, he was abandoned or abused as a kid, and Hank Pym did right to help him “get up” shall we say when he was an adult. He loves Hank, but believes he’s able to be better.
This not only gives him depth, but will let us see what Hank doesn’t do well, and how he’s possessive to a FAULT, with his Pym Particles.
My idea is he’s a reverse-Black Widow. SHIELD brought him in because he, Tony Masters, was experimented on as a kid to cure a disease that would cause him to become braindead quick, and due to this he was given a Photographic Memory and able to Mimic people’s moves in battle. Mom and dad weren’t able to raise him.
Masters did work with SHIELD, and was an asset that little people knew about, who was known as Taskmaster, used to kill people when it was needed most. He was done with being used at a point, around when Natasha was with The Red Room, and dipped.
This where we’ll get to Dreykoff. He won’t be in this. Instead, we’ll use Ivan Bezukhov. He was Nat’s “handler” with The Red Room and he was her “Father-Figure” who brought her in to it. For his relationship with Dreykoff, he’s Vader to Dreykoff’s Palpatine.
Both Ivan and Taskmaster believe people are predictable, they’re only capable of doing what they’re taught. It’s hypocritical though, as Tony is obsessed with becoming the best and self-improvement, and Ivan is not doing what he’s taught, this isn’t working with Russia; and instead of believing that people only CAN do what there taught, like Tony, he believes people SHOULD only do what there taught. They’ll both see Natasha as a deviation from what people are capable of doing, and are going to be disgusted by her existence. Ivan is going to want to use Mind-Control to ensure that this is never going to happen again.
Once Dreykoff was killed, Ivan took over The Red Room. He “evolved” himself by becoming part-robotic. He recruited Tony Masters, who, in a big twist, we’d reveal liked being used and liked killing, and he believed he was “replaced” when Natasha was brought in. Taskmaster is going to believe he has no purpose or use besides killing as a weapon, and that’s what Natasha’s purpose and use is as well.
Taskmaster has right to do work besides what The Red Room gives him, and it’s better than what SHIELD gave him. He was asked by Ivan to deal with Natasha, to get revenge, and that will be his goal to kill her or better, to get in her head, and break her.
I think this is better, Ivan with a personal relationship to her, and Taskmaster as an ideological parallel to her.
#FNAF
#TFO