I have to get this off my mind - here it is a Frozen sequel pitch. This can be a later sequel since I'm sure 3 and maybe 4 are in the works but at this point I'm assuming the characters are where we left them after 2, but that can change.

I'm trying to avoid it but this might get a PG. Trying to avoid a PG-13 but not sure what the rules are.

K.

Opening scene is a ship coming into port at night in a city we haven't seen before. This is the capitol city of the Southern Isles (SI). The king of the SI waits impatiently and hands over a big bag of money to some sketchy character who gets off the ship. The character counts the money and then signals to his crew. A man we barely recognize gets off the ship. He has a scraggly beard, and hair is receding more with touches of grey, but it's frickin Hans. His father has reluctantly bought him out of exile.

I want to make Hans a drunkard at this point but probably need to keep it PG.

Life for Hans back home is not much better than exile. Hans is put in charge of the southern-most of the southern isles. His 12 (right?) older brothers are all a-holes to him. And his father, the king, is embarrassed by him and barely talks to him.

BTW I was thinking Stellan Skarsgård voices the king of the SI so you get the idea.

Cut to -

Elsa woken up by a flash of light in the sky. It's a huge meteor going north to south. The meteor rains dark magic sprite things. The meteor races south. She gasps. Arendelle. Quickly gets on her horse and races after the meteor.

Queen Anna of Arendelle is also woken, by the meteor which thankfully narrowly passes over the kingdom on it's way south. Townspeople are freaking out about the dark magic sprite things littering the streets. Elsa arrives at the gates. The sisters, Olaf, Sven, and Kristoff all are grateful everyone is safe. What was that? In come the trolls. Grand Pabbie gives some exposition "evil and dangerous otherworldly magic" ... something like that.

Cut back to SI. The meteor strikes the southernmost SI, destroying fields of crops and crippling the SIs already fragile economy. Hans is tasked by the King to travel to the southernmost island to investigate. Hans reluctantly travels there by ship. They discover a crater full of dark magic. Hans hears a voice - sounds a bit like Anna - calling him toward the center of the crater. There him and his men find the meteor which is a small innocuous looking black rock. Hans gingerly reaches out and touches it. Suddenly he is seemingly transported to a dark cave or room or whatever. The voice is clearer now "Hans". I was thinking he could start hearing some creepy remixed version of "Love is an open door". The voice is coming from a figure. DARK ANNA - Anna but dressed in all black and maybe red eyes or something. She tells Hans to take back what is his and hands him the black stone. "Wake up" she says. "Hans - wake up" - Hans opens his eyes. He's laying at the bottom of the crater. "He's awake" his men say. He looks down and clutched in his hand is the black meteor stone. Evil music.

Back in Arendelle, the sisters and friends see dark smoke and magic swirling on the horizon in the south. They get word of the meteor strike from messengers from the south. Strange things are happening and the darkness is creeping northward. Grand Pabbie says he does not know this dark magic, and fears the evil will shroud the world. He shows a future of a dark king with a black sword taking the throne of Arendelle. Can this be stopped? Grand Pabbie "I don't know how. But maybe? No - the old gods of the north have not been heard of since..." Grand Pabbie and the sisters rush to the library. Days and nights of research. There is a temple with a bell - a citizen of Arendelle must ring the bell to wake the old gods. But are they still listening? The crew set off to find the temple.

Hans returns to the SI. The black meteor still whispers to him. He gets into some altercation with his oldest brother, the heir. They fight - first with fists, but then the heir draws his sword "I should have done this a long time ago. Before you embarrassed us in Arendelle". The sword comes down - Hans, without thinking, pulls out the meteor. We see a closeup on the heirs eyes go wide. So do Hans. One of those scenes - Hans got stabbed? No - the brother is impaled - by a giant dark sword. The meteor has transformed in to a magic black sword. This is where we might pick up the PG/PG-13. Hans goes on a rampage and kills all his brothers and finally the king. Yeah it's dark but we can gloss over some of this or just imply it to keep PG. Hans puts on his father's crown and sits on the throne of the SI. "What now sire?" "Ready your men...tomorrow we march north."

Meanwhile, the sisters and the gang are looking for the temple. In the distance, though, they see an army approaching Arendelle. Elsa and Anna look at each other in fear. Anna to Elsa: "Go!" Elsa glares back at the dark army and shoots ice and whatever out of her hands sliding/skating/whatever back towards Arendelle.

Hans is at the gates with his army. "ANNAAAAAAAA!" he shouts angrily. He demands the Arendellians open up the gates. This is a good point to have some character be a hero and stand up to Hans and his dark sword. Finally Hans says to the little hero character - "Fine. You will be the first to die." Hans raises the huge dark sword. But then: "HANS!" It's Elsa and she's f-ing pissed. Hans stops, sword in mid air. "Ah - Queen Elsa! Just who I wanted to see next."

EPIC FREAKING ANIME-like battle ensues - Elsa versus Hans. The dark sword gives Hans all sorts of crazy superpowers. Elsa is clearly pretty outmatched but she hates this MFer so much. Hans' army fights Arendelle's army. Elsa is getting kicked around pretty badly by Hans. She gets punched through a wall or something - Hans comes up to her and raises the sword. He could say something like "Deja vu" or "this feels familiar but you don't have your little sister to save you". Elsa looks up at Hans in fear - Hans sword comes down - and then PUNCH - it's Marshmallow! He punches Hans through like six castle walls. Elsa runs into hiding.

Anna and the gang find the entrance to the temple. I was thinking it could be sealed with a riddle they can't solve and Olaf is the one who solves it? Or they have to fend off some ancient temple guards or both. Whatever. They're having trouble getting into the temple.

With the help of Marshmallow, the Arendelle army turns the tide of the battle. Hans is getting pretty pissed off now, and he's looking everywhere for Elsa. "ELSA!" Then he's like - fine - "I'll burn Arendelle to the ground if I have to". Hans and the dark sword rise up into the air. The sword floats above his head and he uses all his powers to focus energy on the sword. He's turning it back into the meteor! And it's aimed at Arendelle! All the towns people are looking up at the scene out their windows and freaking out.

Elsa is with Grand Pabbie and the trolls hiding in the royal library. She sees Hans in the air making the meteor out the window. She's like - I have to try and stop this - and Grand Pabbie is like - you'll die you're no match for him. Only the old gods can save us now. Where the frick is Anna?

Anna climbs the bell tower. The wind is howling around her and she barely makes it. Finally she reaches the top. Gasping she sees below the meteor reforming over Arendelle. Hans. Angrily, she rings the bell. The bell echoes through the land - Anna covers her ears, it echoes through Arendelle, Hans hears it and his attention is diverted toward the sound ("Anna?"). Elsa and Grand Pabbie hear it - looking at each other.

Hans flies as fast as he can to the bell tower. Anna is seemingly knocked out by the loud bell - unconscious. Hans starts monologuing and saying some creepy stuff "Ah, my ex-fiancee, Anna. Heh heh heh. I never loved you, you know, but maybe we could have had an arrangement. Too bad." He grabs her by the collar. Anna begins to wake up. He dangles her off the bell tower "goodbye, my love". Anna spits in his face. He wipes it off and -- drops her. Anna falls falls falls down past the bell tower off an icy cliff into the darkness.

Elsa senses Anna is gone. "NOOOOOO!"

Hans, looking back at Arendelle "now for your sister - heh heh heh". He gets back to Arendelle and heaves the meteor down at the kingdom. The massive rock slowly hurdles towards Arendelle. Out comes Elsa - shooting as much Ice out as she can to hold back the meteor.

Grand Pabbie is watching the scene from the library. Elsa's Ice cracks under the meteor. She can't hold much longer. He looks away. Then sees something - a genealogy - Odin, Thor, whoever, whoever,...Elsa and Anna? But Elsa is an elemental spirit...that means......

Back at the bell tower, Kristoff, Sven and Olaf are mourning Anna and watching the horrible scene unfold in the distance in Arendelle. The bell is still vibrating. We pan down the dark ravine Anna fell into. Shes lying at the bottom. Her arm twitches! Little jolts of electricity shoot from her hands. Down from the sky falls a hammer. It's about to hit Anna in the face but she catches it.

ANNA - DAUGHTER OF ODIN. Flies back to Arendelle with the hammer and smashes the meteor to smithereens. Hans is like OMG ANNA? She has god-like clothing on now and is hovering in the air. Elsa, exhausted collapses to the ground. Anna booms: "STAY THE F AWAY FROM MY SISTER" (can lose the F word unless this gets PG-13 then might as well use it), winds up her hammer, and uppercuts Hans literally into outer space.

Falling action, blah blah blah. Everyone is happy again.

How cringe is this on a scale of 1-10?

Agnarr has just become Tsar after the death of his father Runeard. His first jobs are to deal with his ministers and secret police, preside over Runeard's funeral, and convince Kaiser Hans to accept his marriage to Iduna.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/31589969/chapters/159497575

Elsa and Anna stood in the center of the room, their eyes sparkling with anger. Both sisters were in love with Jack Frost, and now they were arguing about which of them should be with him.

"He's mine!" - Elsa screamed, her voice trembling with emotion.

"No, he's mine!" - Anna answered, her eyes sparkling with tears.

Jack Frost stood between them, his face calm, but his eyes expressing concern.

“Girls, please don’t fight over me,” he said, but the sisters didn’t listen to him. Suddenly Anna took a step forward, her hand reaching out to grab Jack Frost's arm. but at that moment she lost her balance and accidentally pushed Jack Frost out the window.

Jack Frost screamed as he fell from the window and the sisters rushed to him, their hearts beating with fear.

"Jack! Jack, no!" - Elsa screamed, her voice full of panic.

Anna stood next to her, her eyes wide with horror.

"Oh god, what have I done?" - she whispered. Elsa turned to Anna, her eyes filled with tears.

"It's your fault," she said, but then she saw the look on Anna's face and realized that her sister didn't mean to hurt Jack Frost.

"I'm sorry," Anna said, her voice full of remorse.

Elsa sighed and hugged Anna.

"It's not your fault," she said. "We are both to blame for this quarrel."

The sisters stood together, looking at the window where Jack Frost lay on the ground. They knew they needed to make peace and help Jack Frost. "Let's go to him," Elsa said, and the sisters left the room together to help Jack Frost.

When they approached Jack Frost, he was already sitting on the ground, his face was pale, but he was smiling.

“I’m fine,” he said as the sisters approached him.

Elsa and Anna sighed with relief and helped Jack Frost get up.

"We apologize for our quarrel," Elsa said.

“Yes, we were stupid,” Anna added.

Jack Frost smiled and took their hands. "I love you both," he said. "But I can't be with one of you if it means the other one will be unhappy."

The sisters looked at each other, and at that moment they realized that their love for Jack Frost should not ruin their relationship.

"We understand," Elsa said.

“Yes, we will be friends,” Anna added.

Jack Frost smiled and hugged his sisters.

"I'm glad we can be friends," he said. So, the sisters and Jack Frost became friends, and their relationship became even stronger. They learned that love and friendship can be stronger than any disagreement..

Here's the 5th Draft of my Frozen 3 screenplay fan-project, Frozen 3: The Golden Thread on Archive of our Own:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/56032537/chapters/142313440

It consists of 2 'chapters', with the first being the script itself and the 2nd as the updated making-of file, complete with Disney references, Real-world inspiration and concept art.

Summary: Three and a half years after the events of Frozen I, Anna's mid-May wedding plans and Elsa's return from the Northuldra forest are upended by two mysterious visitors, threatening to undo all their hard-won happiness.

This is a direct sequel to my rewrite of Disney's Frozen II, Frozen 2: the River of Memories, or 'Frozen 2: TROM' for short.

The ONLY other Disney works in the franchise that I'm considering as canon for this 'AU setting' here are Frozen 1, and possibly Olaf's Frozen Adventure; and the only date I'm considering as definite here is Elsa's birthday (Winter Solstice 1817), as a starting point.

I'd also like to thank everyone who's read my work and supported my endeavor, including (but not limited to) the following users:

LittleYellowFish2015 (now LittleYellowFish1), Winterwonderrein, Sigma_Nigma, yygmit, gjkofly / DaemonLyra, MrMaster22, Hudjat, TC1827 (now TC1851), Handryck, alfonsoilog, mixmatch1999, hmmfzn, 1throw22away333, I-Alita99-I (now Kjaere-Solace), Sapling_Animation, Victor_Stroievski, Deen223, ChessGamingPro, LockAndKey989, Violinha, galahadBatsy24, tostitos2005, TheDestineOne1000, MR_INSANE3651, bigfrozenfan, scottstot123, reversedelay, HB-Pickle, TheZodiacGamer / Tyler Zodiac, flanker44, Synthiya_7, Elsaisalive, WhimsicalWonder13, AnishmaJoseph

As always, enjoy, and good writing,

Memristormask8

Its a story called "I'll Always Protect You, Sis". The premise of the story is that Elsa wants to protect her younger sister Anna from those who want to use her fire powers for their own ends. But the twist is that magic runs in Elsa's family but (despite her white hair and being born on the winter solstice) she doesnt have ice powers, which she laments on.

Happy Winter Solstice 2023, and happy birthday Queen Elsa.

Here's the 5th Draft of my Frozen 3 screenplay fan-project, Frozen 3: The Golden Thread:

Frozen 3: The Golden Thread - 5th Draft

This is a direct sequel to my rewrite of Disney's Frozen II, Frozen 2: the River of Memories, or 'Frozen 2: TROM' for short.

The ONLY other Disney works in the franchise that I'm considering as canon for this 'AU setting' here are Frozen 1, and possibly Olaf's Frozen Adventure; and the only date I'm considering as definite here is Elsa's birthday (Winter Solstice 1817), as a starting point.

Like many, many creative works, it's taken (significantly) longer than I expected (I came up with the overall plot summary as a 3p pdf by late August 2020), but I enjoyed the challenge, and now you can all enjoy the results of my efforts!

My focus with this 5th Draft was reducing the page count (at 128 pages, compared to the previous Drafts at 189p, 166p, 152p, and 140p respectively), and this Draft has been streamlined to be compatible with either Disney's Frozen II, or my Frozen 2: TROM rewrite.

As I mentioned previously, I've also created a 'Making-of' file that details the references (Real-world, Disney, cultural, etc.) that went into this fan-script's creation, as well as relevant concept art that fits with the vision that I have here. As this contains unmarked spoilers for this script, I plan to make it available on request or for those who've read the full work.

I hope you all enjoy and find inspiration in this, please leave constructive criticism too if you want here or via the email address on the Title page. Also please keep in mind that this is a fan-project not intended for sale.

I'd also like to thank everyone who's read my work and supported my endeavor, including (but not limited to) the following users:

LittleYellowFish2015 (now LittleYellowFish1), Winterwonderrein, Sigma_Nigma, yygmit, gjkofly / DaemonLyra, MrMaster22, Hudjat, TC1827 (now TC1851), Handryck, alfonsoilog, mixmatch1999, hmmfzn, 1throw22away333, I-Alita99-I (now Kjaere-Solace), Sapling_Animation, Victor_Stroievski, Deen223, ChessGamingPro, LockAndKey989, Violinha, galahadBatsy24, tostitos2005, TheDestineOne1000, MR_INSANE3651, bigfrozenfan, scottstot123, reversedelay, HB-Pickle, TheZodiacGamer / Tyler Zodiac, flanker44, Synthiya_7, Elsaisalive, WhimsicalWonder13, AnishmaJoseph

As always, enjoy, and good writing,

Memristormask8

I’ve finally had the chance to update my Frozen/Russian Revolution crossover fic. It’s the beginning of Agnarr’s Eastern Journey

https://archiveofourown.org/works/31589969/chapters/125919688

As promised, here's the 4th Draft of Frozen 3: The Golden Thread:

Frozen 3: The Golden Thread - 4th Draft

This is a direct sequel to my rewrite of Disney's Frozen II, Frozen 2: the River of Memories, or 'Frozen 2: TROM' for short.

The ONLY other Disney works in the franchise that I'm considering as canon for this 'AU setting' here are Frozen 1, and possibly Olaf's Frozen Adventure; and the only date I'm considering as definite here is Elsa's birthday (Winter Solstice 1817), as a starting point.

Like many, many creative works, it's taken (significantly) longer than I expected (I came up with the overall plot summary as a 3p pdf by late August 2020), but I enjoyed the challenge, and now you can all enjoy the results of my efforts!

My focus with this 4th Draft was reducing the page count (at 140 pages, compared to the previous Drafts at 189p, 166p, 152p respectively), and this Draft has been streamlined to be compatible with either Disney's Frozen II, or my Frozen 2: TROM rewrite.

As I mentioned previously, I've also created a 'Making-of' file that details the references (Real-world, Disney, cultural, etc.) that went into this fan-script's creation, as well as relevant concept art that fits with the vision that I have here. As this contains unmarked spoilers for this script, I plan to make it available on request or for those who've read the full work.

I hope you all enjoy and find inspiration in this, please leave constructive criticism too if you want here or via the email address on the Title page. Also please keep in mind that this is a fan-project not intended for sale.

I'd also like to thank everyone who's read my work and supported my endeavor, including (but not limited to) the following users:

LittleYellowFish2015 (now LittleYellowFish1), Winterwonderrein, Sigma_Nigma, yygmit, gjkofly / DaemonLyra, MrMaster22, Hudjat, TC1827 (now TC1851), Handryck, alfonsoilog, mixmatch1999, hmmfzn, 1throw22away333, I-Alita99-I (now Kjaere-Solace), Sapling_Animation, Victor_Stroievski, Deen223, ChessGamingPro, LockAndKey989, Violinha, galahadBatsy24, tostitos2005, TheDestineOne1000, MR_INSANE3651, bigfrozenfan, scottstot123, reversedelay, HB-Pickle, TheZodiacGamer / Tyler Zodiac, flanker44, Synthiya_7, Elsaisalive, WhimsicalWonder13, AnishmaJoseph

As always, enjoy, and good writing,

Memristormask8

For various reasons it's taken me over 6 months to publish, but here's chapter 6 of Blood Red Snow Queen, my fic that puts characters from Frozen in the event of the Russian Revolution

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/31589969/chapters/112921630

As promised, here's the 3rd Draft of Frozen 3: The Golden Thread:

Frozen 3: The Golden Thread - 3rd Draft

This is a direct sequel to my rewrite of Disney's Frozen II, Frozen 2: the River of Memories, or 'Frozen 2: TROM' for short.

The ONLY other Disney works in the franchise that I'm considering as canon for this 'AU setting' here are Frozen 1, and possibly Olaf's Frozen Adventure; and the only date I'm considering as definite here is Elsa's birthday (Winter Solstice 1817), as a starting point.

Like many, many creative works, it's taken (significantly) longer than I expected (I came up with the overall plot summary as a 3p pdf by late August 2020), but I enjoyed the challenge, and now you can all enjoy the results of my efforts!

My focus with this 3rd Draft was reducing the page count (at 152 pages, it's 14p less than the 2nd Draft, and 37p less than the 1st), and this Draft has been streamlined to be compatible with either Disney's Frozen II, or my Frozen 2: TROM rewrite.

As I mentioned previously, I've also created a 'Making-of' file that details the references (Real-world, Disney, cultural, etc.) that went into this fan-script's creation, as well as relevant concept art that fits with the vision that I have here. As this contains unmarked spoilers for this script, I plan to make it available on request or for those who've read the full work.

I hope you all enjoy and find inspiration in this, please leave constructive criticism too if you want here or via the email address on the Title page. Also please keep in mind that this is a fan-project not intended for sale.

I'd also like to thank everyone who's read my work and supported my endeavor, including (but not limited to) the following users:

LittleYellowFish2015 (now LittleYellowFish1), Winterwonderrein, Sigma_Nigma, yygmit, gjkofly / DaemonLyra, MrMaster22, Hudjat, TC1827 (now TC1851), Handryck, alfonsoilog, mixmatch1999, hmmfzn, 1throw22away333, I-Alita99-I (now Kjaere-Solace), Sapling_Animation, Victor_Stroievski, Deen223, ChessGamingPro, LockAndKey989, Violinha, galahadBatsy24, tostitos2005, TheDestineOne1000, MR_INSANE3651, bigfrozenfan, scottstot123, reversedelay, HB-Pickle, TheZodiacGamer / Tyler Zodiac, flanker44, Synthiya_7, Elsaisalive, WhimsicalWonder13, AnishmaJoseph

As always, enjoy, and good writing,

Memristormask8

Anybody know any fanfics that are similar to Elsa Is Suffering? Such as stories set in modern times.

I'm looking for any Self Insert fics where the SI inserts into Elsa.

(Spoilers for No Way Home if you haven't watched it yet!)

Let's say Disney gives you an opportunity to make a Frozen movie like Spider-Man: No Way Home, a movie where Elsa and Anna face villains from alternate versions of themselves. Now, let's say Disney gives you the right to choose five villains from Frozen fanfics you read to be the antagonists of the movie like previous five Spidey villains are in No Way Home.

What villains will you choose?

I don't know all five right now, but Daniel from A Frozen Wight would be one of them.

Daniel: Look who showed up. My old friend Elsa.

Elsa: Do I know you?

EDIT: Let's say Elsa and Anna's world also has it's Doctor Strange, to make things work better.