Im applying to UMich and wanted to see if anyone would be willing to look over my essays, I would appreciate it a lot and I can take a look at your essays if need.

Was wondering if someone could review my essay, I've never written one before and I'm looking for some constructive criticism!

If anyone is available to review my essays, I would truly appreciate your help! Feel free to send me a message, and I’ll be grateful to send them your way. Thank you so much!

Hey! I am applying to UMich and wanted to see if anyone would be interested in doing some sort of an essay swap (I would review your essays while you would review mine). I just want an extra pair of eyes to point out if anything sounds weird, feels bland, etc. Send me a DM if your interested!

If anyone is available to review my essays, I would truly appreciate your help! Feel free to either share your email here or send me a message, and I’ll be happy to send them your way. Thank you so much!

anyone willing to read and review a college supplemental essay for me?

just reply and ill dm it to you

college essay about struggling with an eating disorder throughout high school looking for feedback and help with revision lmk and I’ll send u my essay

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Hi everyone! I’m finishing up my application for grad school and want to include an addendum for the leave of absence that I took during COVID.

I am struggling to tie it up in the final paragraph and have spent waaaay too much time trying to get it right, but no luck.

Help!

Hey, we have a college counseling group where we do weekly essay reviews for undergrad admissions, it's free, if you want drop a comment and I'll dm you the link.

i was wondering if anyone applied Ed2 or ED1 to Bryn Mawr?

So I’m starting to look at my college essay. I want to write about my sister with autism and a developmental issue who drives me because she has things she is unable to do (go to college, live on her own) which I can do which make me take advantage of any opportunities I’m given. I always used to sort of brush her off when I was younger or get along with her, but now I see that she is seriously like the sweetest person ever and that I want to make her happy by doing the things she can’t do (sorry for yap). My other sister wrote hers on how she sees her with “rose colored glasses” (as perfect and only seeing good). I really liked this and was sort of thinking about talking about it as a race, one which she constantly fell behind in but still supports me and my other sister but we are almost leaving her behind. Does anyone have any suggestions on how I would begin this writing?Particularly like a first sentence because I am very stuck right now.

Hello! I know this is a big ask but it is very important to me. I am writing an essay for my dream school that is due on February 1. I have so much information I would like to fit into it, but I have been struggling organizing it and making it into an essay that flows smoothly. I was curious if anyone would be willing to read what I have and help me brainstorm how to fix this mess of an essay I currently have. Again, I would like to preface that I know this may be a big ask and I am in no way looking for someone to write my essay for me!! I would just really appreciate some ideas with what I currently have.

They aren't bad right now but I need some more help just making sure I'm including everything I should be. Thanks.

Hello! I am currently applying to Boston Uni for my masters and I'm in desperate need of someone to review my essay. My first language is not english so I might have made several grammatical mistakes. Please feel free to dm me to help ❤️🙏🏼❤️🙏🏼

I am a bit stuck I don’t know if what I’m writing is good or completely terrible and don’t know what direction to go in with the prompt they gave it’s way too vague

I need some help working on a couple of my college supplements! I've got them written but they just need polishing! Any help is appreciated.

YALL, IM A HS SENIOR applying to college and my applications are due Wednesday the 15th. I haven’t even started my personal statement and I’m panicking. Could someone PLEASE help guide me/ give me tips on how to start.

Hi, I’m applying to schools in Korea so most of my papers are about my life in the United States. I need to send these in to get them translated by next Tuesday and was wondering if anyone was willing to review one or possibly a few? I’ll really appreciate it!

I can let you read my old one from when I first applied too if you want to pick which is better. Any feedback is appreciated! I really suck at writing so plz be honest with me

Can someone help me review my college personal essay peer for peer? Thanks:)

hello guys does anyone have some time to review my essays thank you

Hello everyone,

I’ve recently submitted my college applications and would really value some feedback on my application .

Thanks so much!

I need help I’m stressing. My Wheaton college il supplement is due in 3 days and it’s mid. I also have the Ohio state uni scholarship essay I need help!!! please!

thanks

Pretty short essay, anyone comment or message if you are willing to mark it based on ms, I really appreciate anyone willing to, this is pretty significant essay adn due at 12

When applying to a school I am asked to write an article about the conditions of my country for your information that school cares about peace

What should I avoid and what should I do? For your information, that school also contains students of all nationalities.

250 words

I just finished my college essay about OCD and I am willing for someone to review it. Thank you