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The other reason is that the central focus of the story (perhaps I should have left in the 200 word summary) was how a seemingly insignificant event that occurs during the EU4 timeframe, i.e. the British landing in Quiberon (compared to say, the fall of Constantinople, discovery of the new world, reformation, enlightenment, Waterloo, etc) could have drastic differences on Europe as we know it today.

It's also quite ironic that the person giving out grammar advice misses quite a big grammar fail in his first paragraph, but such is life. I'm glad you enjoyed the 'action sequences', I was worried that I may have trivialised warfare a little too much. That is part of the reason I avoided another major battle at Rennes. The other reason is that the central focus of the story (perhaps I should have left in the 200 word summary) was how a seemingly insignificant event that occurs during the EU4 timeframe, i.e. the British landing in Quiberon (compared to say, the fall of Constantinople, discovery of the new world, reformation, enlightenment, Waterloo, etc) could have drastic differences on Europe as we know it today. I hypothesise that a successful Quiberon and a Kingdom of Brittany opposed to the French on their eastern border, and Prussia/Germany on the western border, may have changed the result of the Franco-Prussian war, in favour of Prussian militarists leading to much harsher territorial concessions instead of Bismarck's more constrained demands. The existence of an independent Brittany may have also changed the views of Ernst Renan (French historian and political theorist), who suddenly threw out his anti-semitism, racism and devout religion (his earlier works were related to the language of Christian texts) and wrote about French Unity, fired up by French nationalism following French defeat in 1871. This is perhaps even more surprising as Renan was also a reader of German theorists on the nation, such as Fitch and Herder. Born in Brittany, and therefore not French in this alternate timeline, Renan would therefore be unlikely to be inspired by French national ideals and instead be devoted to the 'ethnic' nationalist cause, continuing to follow German and religious theory on the nation and applying it to Brittany.

Although you are right, it is too much to expect the reader to have the exact same library of knowledge that I have. But I didn't want to write 'just another Michael Bay film', full of action, fun, but not really much substance. Again I should have taken my own advice and probably expanded this into some form of novel, where the serious ideas of European Nationalism can be more thoroughly explored, and justice given to this subject. Perhaps I could also have tried harder to explore the varying types of nationalism within the EU4 timeframe, akin to your suggestion, although considering nationalism as a modern concept was still in its infancy I probably would have struggled to find a legitimate reason for a sudden display of pan-European patriotic fervour.

I hope by 'flabbergasted' you mean surprised or shocked, and not disgusted or offended! The alternate Europe of course is different from real Europe, and I was particularly careful to avoid mentioning any specific countries. If anyone should be offended by the conclusion it should be the (few) socially-aware Australians. As Australia is a country so far away from basically everything, we are shielded from many troubles that even developed parts of the world face, for example, tensions between migrants and locals in (real life) Europe. In a world where ethnic (German, and by extention, Breton) nationalism triumphed instead of civic (French) nationalism, I can only logically conclude that this tension would even be worse. In this round-about way, in a world where such a small change in history can trigger such a massive change in modernity, this is a fictitous-thesis arguing for greater integration of history in the education system. But again, you are right in that I should have accounted for the fact that my readers don't get access to my brain through telepathy, and might get lost wading through many sudden time jumps.

Rules: I. Grammar II. Racism III. No Nsfw IV. No Supporting Israel

Also look r/paradoxplaza or r/totalwar etc

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Least deranged TNO fan

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Casus beli: HUMILATE

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Blackshirts, Blackshirts everywhere.

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This is a curious scenario. Palestine is free but not how you expect.

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Halloween

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Guns, Drums and Steel 3

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Bro hired burgundiansđź’€

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Worst event as Rome, the fires above Napoli will burn in my retina for hours to come.

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Currently working on a mod, thought I'd put my spin on a classic

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Babe wake up,Paradox just released a marketable plushie

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Is united crowns an end game tag in eu4(I was banned for 30 from main sub for reasons)

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Pope has the power to do this to himself.

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In memory, real world Kursk offensive isn't going as well as they hope.

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Possible bug - Characters remaining nude for months/years after seducing/being seduced?

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1869 was a good year for Russia

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TNO's fanbase is officially dead now. Billions must play Kaiserredux instead.

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I can't stop building the orange factories

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Austria if it was lore accurate(according to EU4 players):

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Worst HOI4 Memes For Worst HOI4 Players 2 (HOI4 Memes 21-40)

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Lol,lmao even

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1 years after i fail to destroy a Federation....

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Oops sorry, I've decided to kill myself during your invasion. No, sadly you can't take the land anymore... You can keep the infamy tho

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Mandate restored, but something is off

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German Censorship

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Soviets having a good run.

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Moscow-Berlin axis be like:

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