/r/AnimationCrit
A friendly space to receive and give feedback on each other's character animations. All skill levels and tools welcome.
Please note that all posts have to include a question or request for feedback in the TITLE, not comments. Your submission also has to be a character animation, video editing and animatics are not allowed.
Welcome to /r/animationcrit, a friendly space where you can post your animations and receive feedback!
RULES:
You cannot post someone else's work, commercial work, etc. Your post also has to include an animation in some stage of progress.
Animation in this case is defined by creating the illusion of movement through a rapid succession of handcrafted images. Recordings of your screen does not count as animation, low effort animation has to take rule 4 into account.
This is a forum for giving and receiving feedback, and in order to encourage conversation around an animated piece the post needs to include a specific question or a request. It is not enough to simply post "This is my animation", the post has to show that you are interested in hearing what people have to say about it.
Here are a few examples of what you could ask: "How can I improve this animation?" "What's missing in this animation?" "What do you think about the art style?"
We will assume that you are posting to this subreddit to grow and improve as an animator, and then likes/views/shares don't matter. If you are looking to share your animation with the world, try posting to /r/animation.
We welcome animation that is work in progress, however we ask that you describe where you are in the progress using one of these words in the title: storyboard, animatic, boardomatic, leica reel, blocking, or a similar term you think suits.
If your work is simply "low effort", meaning it's more of an image slide show than an animation, this will not count as an actual animation. Animation needs to convey the illusion of movement to count as such, image slide shows does not accomplish this.
/r/AnimationCrit
This is my first ever animation so please any and all critic would be appreciated and thank you so much
First stop frame in adobe fresco
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/ZmViYTJlYTk0/?offlineMode=1#/25050318/25980950/f_187 Appreciate any feedback on my jump! FYI if the start and end looks too linear, it's because I'm planning to show this off in engine when blending from/into her walk and run cycle in my demo reel. So thought it'd be better to start from the anticipation pose. Please let me know if I shouldn't do this if showing in my reel, thanks!
From what I can tell the anticipation is weak but I dunno how else to improve it. Programs used Iyan 3d Pro (iOS) FlipaClip (iOS)
Animation wip, i'd like feedback and criticism if its ok, advice is really helpful Preferably on how to do better movements and angles but everything is super helpful
I have a decent amount of experience in drawing, but I know she walks weird with her arm.