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I made this song called Be With You, I would appreciate any feedback you have:)
04:58 UTC
shits on the stairs
https://youtube.com/shorts/RQaDBBFwL7o?feature=share
first song in a long time. would love feedback.
03:50 UTC
thinking - Still a lot I would tweak and change, but I'd be stuck forever so I'm calling this one here. Let me know what you think
It's far from perfect, but if it can portray the vibe and message, I'm okay with rough around the edges. Thanks for stopping up listen, I appreciate it
18:33 UTC
FM by Project "Project"
A new original experimental song of mine, hope you’ll give it a chance ;)
16:51 UTC
Boston Flowers - Afterlife
Softcore/alternative rock from Brooklyn/NYC
16:44 UTC
All Her Pretty Things - perhaps the most important thing I've ever written.
16:08 UTC
New Release - Til Tomorrow
Hey all your wonderful music-loving peeps.
My debut single Til Tomorrow is finally out! 🎶
Bright, uplifting vibes to get you through the day—give it a listen and let me know what you think! 💛 👉
06:46 UTC
Kusky -Believe(feat.Lloyd Soul)
I have been trying to emulate great Artists like Michael Jackson and I am looking for advice on how to elevate my music to the next level lyrically.Please give feedback on my latest release
03:27 UTC
Looking for feedback
Hi All,
I recorded this acoustic instrumental song inspired by guitarists like Tommy Emmanuel and was just wondering what people think of it. I feel like I may have rushed it and that I need a bigger-bodied guitar to capture more low-end. A few friends say it's good, but I thought I'd get some strangers' opinions, who are under no obligation to be nice lol.
https://on.soundcloud.com/vTaEA6nvoFtj5UqV8
Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
01:29 UTC
Any criticism?
20:37 UTC
Feedback on my music?
https://on.soundcloud.com/J5KbaZpWNdsJQQNY7
Been writing experimental stuff w midi keys+garageband, occasionally recording drums and guitar over the tracks (but the real instrument recordings not using midi cable are very low quality)
Anyway these aren’t really complete songs. Kind of just ideas that emerged from mostly duplicating whatever comes to mind during one section on the first improvised recording (with some editing but mostly editing is minimal as I’m using GarageBand mobile and don’t have patience) adding layers etc
20:11 UTC
Looking to help people out some
Heyo! Just looking to put myself out there and start assisting people with their songwriting. If you need an outside opinion on your stuff, or have a tendency of getting stuck feel free to message me! I'm not looking to get anything in return, just looking to get back into the creative side of songwriting and production as I have spent too much time on my own.
I do have a project/band that I've been working on for forever if you want an example of my own work.
05:49 UTC
Hows my songwriting
I’ll upload in case you can’t discern some of the vocals
I clean my life up Just to come back around And fuck it up I’ll throw it out the window shut all em out
I clean my life up But I can’t hold it out Drugs and depression and just sitting at home on my couch.
I fucked my life up Man suck it up Fuck it I can’t blame em all for shutting me out I fucking suck And I can’t pick it up I wanna bang it out (Thug it out) Im holding out for everything im holding on
Now the jigs up And my tears are dry I trust myself (love myself) im moving up Im moving on im moving on
You didn’t get me then youre losing now youre stupid wrong
They didnt get me then come get me yeah come get it all
Yeah I did it all I did it all
I did everything I wanted
And now I think im all they talk about The moneys falling now My moneys falling out my pockets when I walk around
Aint it funny how some people in your life come in Just to cause some strife Im in hell Or is this heaven Ive been seeing number 7’s My base is so aggressive
And then some more stuff I freestyled
05:36 UTC
Looking for feedback
New to the group. This week I wrapped up my first attempt at an album and got it on Spotify and YouTube. Today is the first day I started sending links. I’ll post one of my songs here about PTSD for veterans. From there if anyone is curious enough, please check out my other songs. Let me know what you think please. Thanks
04:43 UTC
Need some song writing help
I need some help writing the second verse of this song and also fix some of the lyrics before the first bridge. Basically the intro of the song. I would also like if you guys can give me some feedback on how I can improve my mixing and delivery.
(I’ve seen a liar whats with the face
happy
ever
after they say )
wish it would have been would have been true
so what about what about what about trust
cus i might say its over
what about what about love
ive given all i have what about what about us
im saying what about what about trust
03:29 UTC
pls give me feedback on this song i'm making
it's not finished yet. I haven't done a lot of rock songs so I hope you guys like this.
Link to song: Invisible face - DJMUCHOBLIGED by DJ MUCH OBLIGED | BandLab
verse 1:
(yeah) I see walking on the other side of the street
you'd look oh so pretty if you were with me (ay)
and you'd light up my world if you stood next to me
i'm locked outside, wish I could find the key,
i'm locked outside waiting for you, set me free
I wanna feel you, not just in my dreams, (yeah)
Stop running from me, let me see what you mean (ay)
(and so)
chorus:
I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
see your invisible face
cause I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
see your invisible face
your like a flame but you leave a trace (yeah trace)
I wanna find that trace (ay)
cause I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
(see your invisible face)
verse 2:
(not written yet)
chorus:
I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
see your invisible face
cause I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
see your invisible face
like a flame but you leave a trace (yeah)
I wanna find that trace
and I wanna see your invisible face (yeah)
(see your invisible face)
03:08 UTC
Writing a Bridge
Hello fellow songwriters, I am a Lyricist and Vocalist who is coming off of a 6 year hiatus from songwriting, and am writing in a different way/structure than I have in the past. My first song in 6 years is to a point that I already love, but my plan was to have a 4-line bridge between the last two choruses. Problem is, I have never written a bridge in my life, so I'm feeling a little lost 😂 Any suggestions or advice? Below, is what I have so far for my lyrics:
I walk these lands of hallow ground Amid the silence of lost and found A phantom's words paint false delight A kiss of hope, lost to the night Follow
A pathway dimmed Herds lonesome fears A tainted wind That brings me here
You The ghost Who plays with my heart You are the one Lurking in the dark A lure of light Leading deep to the dark Your silence Drives the knives Deeper In my heart
The downpour rains of my own tears Like demon whispers in my ears Existence blurs between truth and lies A fading soul you'll bleed dry Trust me
Cloaked in light You breathe deceit If I don't fight You'll bury me!
You The ghost Who plays with my heart You are the one Lurking in the dark I read from the stones The fate that is carved By hands Of my breath The dead Leave just scars
(4-line Bridge to-be-written, insert here)
You The ghost Who plays with my heart You are the one Mocking Heavens stars A glimmer of light Calls to me from afar Eternal Is the plight When love Needs a heart
23:20 UTC
I'm making a song about my psychosis. What should it be called?
Feel free to leave more ideas in the comments
23:19 UTC
Songwriters looking to collab?
Hi! My name is Bree Moore and I’m an aspiring singer. I love to create music but writing is not my strong suit. If anyone is or knows of any songwriters that are willing to collab with me on music that would be awesome!! I do have some releases on Spotify so if you want to check it out feel free to do so right here!
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/3lIohxZssYgE02OmxOu41Z?si=krIYR34lQWGUGQTOOcbQ7Q YouTube: https://youtube.com/@breemooremusic?si=qVpSzmlDH4BvtNHn
My email is: aubreymoore1211@gmail.com Discord: breemoore
Or message me in the app if interested!
18:21 UTC
My new track. I wanted some walk on music much like Swamp Song by Oasis!
11:59 UTC
Looking for vocalist
Hello everyone I’m looking for someone who can help me finish a few songs. Genres I play: Metalcore, Alternative etc. I have demos and lyrics so if you in let me know and I’ll sent it to you
08:36 UTC
Definitely a work in progress, but is this good/interesting?
08:07 UTC
Any feedback? I'm not really a great singer
06:12 UTC
Hey friends - Still dancing to this song I made
“Lifeline” by Kyonn. A song I released 4 months ago that’s been getting some really good attention. I hope to one day hear my music in film or television. Still getting better each day as a songwriter.
22:46 UTC
Birmingham, Alabama
First post here but looking for some local songwriters to meet and collab with. I live within an hour from Birmingham and would love to meet like minded people. I play country, rock, and alternative.
19:44 UTC
devil's hand , Don't Play Cards with the Devil (country musik folk song ...
15:24 UTC
creating a project rn . anyone wanna help me ?
So hi im making a mini project this week to pass time while waiting for Christmas . Im making a acoustic pop song / minimal rock song and a pop song .
What im trying to say is that im looking for some collaborators / help for some songs im making . By the way , im writing music just for fun .
Dont worry , its just some basic acoustic pop / indie pop tracks and a simple rock song .
If youre down to collab or help me finish the project just message me here . And Ill tell you my vision and what to do
Thank you very much !
10:06 UTC
What do you guys think of the 2-5-1-4 Chord Progression
I written my first song this year, and I honestly didn't know what chord progression it utilizes until recently. But oddly, I don't see that much info on it, 85% of my song uses this chord progression (2514 / ii-V-I-IV / F#m-BM-EM-AM)
What genres of music is this chord progression often used in? Is it common in Pop, rock or other contemporary genres?
08:13 UTC
Good-Looking Corpse - Birds Sing
07:22 UTC
My latest collab fuses a more alternative sound with hip-hop/rap. As always, all feedback welcome.
07:01 UTC
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