Logline: Three hitmen are sent to eliminate a client at his house. But when the client’s best friends arrive unexpectedly, the tables turn. Now trapped with a dead body and the client’s friends, the hitmen must find a way out—without escalating the situation any further.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/18K9YuC-PDroJRlvO7zEXK7Rpz5LC0pnI/view?usp=sharing

I’ve been working on it for a while since I first shared the project, and I believe I’ve made considerable progress. I’m quite confident in this draft.

I would love to hear your feedback—what worked, what didn’t, whether it was funny or immature, how you feel about the characters and anything else that comes to mind. Please feel free to tell me. I’d be glad to rework anything I find less than great in the screenplay.

Thanks in advance for your time, I appreciate it.

Disclaimer- I'm still not sure whether it will be a TV series or a feature. I consider both options to be reasonable possibilities, and based on some previous feedback I’ve received, I believe it could evolve into a TV series.

Logline: During the early days of a zombie apocalypse, a group of survivors invite a stranger into their home. They soon realize that the infection may not be their biggest threat.

Looking for feedback on pacing. Trying to see if it keeps you turning the pages. Especially after the time jump.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_T15zZUCyXBP75kukjpwGowSx0FYu0He/view?usp=drivesdk

wrote this one in college, now i think there's a nugget for something more in here. pardon the grammatical errors

Genre: Action-Thriller

Logline: The sole survivor of a shipwreck finds himself amongst the crew of a seal hunting expedition led by an unhinged captain.

Length: 5 pages

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oisBJcMZgrfkuh_6Xl7vSqnfAzaF_h0U/view?usp=drivesdk

Hello there,

I hope this post finds you well! My name is Antea, and I am a first-year film student. Here, you may find a re-upload first ever final script and its refinements on the pitching end of the spectrum within this month, which I am exceedingly excited to show you all...

GENRE: Psychological Black Comedy-Drama Thriller
LOGLINE: Years after a tragic loss, a married couple returns to crime to seek revenge, and faces the consequences at the hands of their adversaries.
LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LYEu_9GzKTKoiya41vw7QHS7TzDwx7_y/view?usp=drive_link

Have a good read, everyone! <3

Premise: A mockumentary following the staffers and head speechwriter Sarah as they have to deal with well-intended but unfiltered President William Reeves and put out the constant fires he starts.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NaTuTWRShP_XXNHEC9o6dmDmENS5WIib/view?usp=sharing

Any feedback would be appreciated!

I know it's timely lol but I wrote this initially in April and have been rewriting it, it kind of morphed into a comedy set in reality like The Boys morbidly has loll.

Hi!
Still waiting for a feedback for this one. :)

TOWN OF ME

Genre: Drama
Page count: 25

Logline:
In a desolate city where shadows walk by day and terrorize by night, a weary survivor battles isolation and fear, finding fleeting connections in an unrelenting world haunted by faceless figures.

Synopsis:
In a city overrun by enigmatic, faceless Shadows, Randy, a middle-aged man, navigates the ruins of a once-thriving civilization. By day, the Shadows coexist in eerie silence, but by night, they turn hostile, forcing Randy to constantly seek shelter and safety. During his journey, he encounters an untrusting stranger, Jaden, and a loyal German Shepherd named Chief, each revealing fragments of hope and hostility in a world devoid of humanity.

As Randy wrestles with the crushing weight of survival, he’s driven by glimpses of his lost son, Noah, appearing amidst the Shadows like a fleeting beacon of purpose. But every attempt to reconnect with his past is thwarted by an indifferent and brutal reality. Town of Me explores themes of loneliness, humanity’s collapse, and the
struggle to retain hope in a world where survival often eclipses compassion.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RPgW8CsBwwcoeHRU3kg36X_070kV8SVb/view?usp=drive_link

"A murderous bowling ball seeks revenge on bowlers that have disrespected him"

Please give honest feedback, I'd like to make this into an actual short soon and want to know how it reads. Thank you

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VzIsbxOXMmNzE5MEa_DionGsfGGwOmfA/view?usp=drivesdk

Logline: Given immunity from prosecution by the Supreme Court, the US president takes extreme measures to rid himself of his nemesis and stay in power.

Genre: Thriller.

Page count: 8

Estimated budget: Low 6 figures.

Link to PDF file

(In fact, it's more comedic drama, so yeah)

Pages: 121 pages

Logline: Will a cancer-stricken mother spare her hating sons after they commit a robbery led by a maniacal killer?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vZve5yfKpjNVhxfPTt8xijgO-XeUsy-h/view?usp=drive_link

I would appreciate any
criticism, especially about the characters, pacing, and the conflict.

Thanks in advance!

(Yes, English is my second language)

over the course of my Thanksgiving Break, ive made a little Stop-Motion LEGO FIlm movie script - that i hope one day I can publish and create on YouTube

Title: Deadpool: Maximum Carnage

Plot: Deadpool is hired to take down a cult that worships Carnage, a chaotic and murderous symbiote. However, when Carnage escapes, Deadpool must team up with a reluctant Spider-Man to prevent Carnage from spreading his influence across the city. The film is filled with Deadpool’s signature humor, breaking the fourth wall, and over-the-top action sequences, while also exploring the dynamic between Deadpool and Spider-Man.

hope it works and I hope you have a great time reading it just as much as I did making it

LINK - Deadpool: MAXIMUM CARNAGE

Howdy, amateur screenwriter here.

Hoping for people to read and review the first draft of my script. Looking for pros/cons/potential -- any feedback, constructive criticism, suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.

Logline: After moving in with a gay couple, one of whom is deaf, a young surrogate begins to learn more about love, family, and connection over the course of her pregnancy.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_IcFvwhsa0GBnzIqLA55iogY0115NB9W/view?usp=sharing

Let me know your honest thoughts and opinions. Hope you enjoy :)

Cheers.

Howdy, amateur sreenwriter here.

Hoping for people to read and review the first draft of my script. Looking for pros/cons/potential -- any feedback, constructive criticism, suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.

Logline: An alcoholic teacher must try and survive alongside his student, her mother, and a war veteran in an effort to find safety and redemption in the middle of a zombie apocalypse.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WSnNxvBYkQcZVWZls7ewK0GlRPCUCW_V/view?usp=sharing

Let me know your honest thoughts and opinions. Hope you enjoy :)

Cheers

LOGLINE: Showoff Tom Midgley, hungry for success, toiled seven lonely years to discover a risky chemical worth millions. Loner Pat Patterson loved pure science, but took on a team and oil money to uncover a deadly worldwide threat. Decades apart, their opposite lives ran on a collision course.

Any feedback is welcome. Tell me how far you get.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kb0dLwrHTllqz9XqPkLesbXA88Xgj9BS/view?usp=drive_link

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-kP6z_mSlSBAb2I5ycRTS5pe5dfED3Rn/view?usp=drivesdk

TOWN OF ME

Genre: Drama
Page count: 25

Logline:
In a desolate city where shadows walk by day and terrorize by night, a weary survivor battles isolation and fear, finding fleeting connections in an unrelenting world haunted by faceless figures.

Synopsis:
In a city overrun by enigmatic, faceless Shadows, Randy, a middle-aged man, navigates the ruins of a once-thriving civilization. By day, the Shadows coexist in eerie silence, but by night, they turn hostile, forcing Randy to constantly seek shelter and safety. During his journey, he encounters an untrusting stranger, Jaden, and a loyal German Shepherd named Chief, each revealing fragments of hope and hostility in a world devoid of humanity.

As Randy wrestles with the crushing weight of survival, he’s driven by glimpses of his lost son, Noah, appearing amidst the Shadows like a fleeting beacon of purpose. But every attempt to reconnect with his past is thwarted by an indifferent and brutal reality. Town of Me explores themes of loneliness, humanity’s collapse, and the
struggle to retain hope in a world where survival often eclipses compassion.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1RPgW8CsBwwcoeHRU3kg36X_070kV8SVb/view?usp=drive_link

Genre: Supernatural/Psychological horror (though more towards psychological)

Logline: An adopted young becomes the centre of an upcoming premonition.

Sidenotes: civ means civility which in turn means people.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xx2ppc4wxsyJ4LSAClNCClPCtaV5_6Ey/view?usp=sharing

Would love feedback from any fans of Sunny or otherwise. Wrote it with a friend. Above all, hope the dialogue feels true to the show.

The Gang Fights for the Throne

A rural couple move to the city and find themselves terrorised by the neighbours after speaking to the police when a young local woman goes missing.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-UKFMF6Dn1yapZr2q_6NtSO6MKSbSg6B/view?usp=sharing

Contains mature language

Does the story feel believable? Is there any aspect or characters that could be expanded upon? Is the ending satisfying?

Hey guys. So, currently I’m deep in preparation for writing my feature screenplay. I’ve got a strong idea of the plot, inciting incident, low point and climax but for some reason it’s been very hard for me to actually start writing the thing. Here’s some things that I’m having trouble with.

1. I’m struggling to find a personality for my protagonist, like I know what he does but I don’t know how he acts while he does it - does this make sense ?

2. Im struggling with what happens in the script between the beats I’ve come up with - for example I know what happens on the first few pages and I know what the inciting incident is but I can’t figure out what happens between them.

3. My story is a body horror/mystery centering around a demonice possession of a family

I’m aiming for a combination of the mystery solving from “The Ring”, the terror and bleakness from “Hereditary” and the body horror from “Slither” with the tone being very dim but building up to a heroic final battle in the end where the protagonist fights the evil and wins.

I guess what I need is some advice on how to bring all my ideas, beats and rambling and turn them into a finished product.

Thanks for listening to my rambling - love y’all ✌️😎

Hi everyone, I'm looking for feedback on my short screenplay. It's gone through some reworking a bit since I last got feedback. I'm hoping to get one or two more rewrites before considering it final since I'd like to direct it. Any feedback appreciated!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eDWPoir79c4KE2oURdWAAiK47LrUaK1dK4fqOncxgEU/edit?tab=t.0

GENRE: Drama

LOGLINE: As a nurse tends to her dying patient with dementia, his fragmented memories resurface, compelling her to confront her own buried past—or be haunted by it forever.

SYNOPSIS: In the somber, emotionally charged world of hospice care, Annya*, a young African-American nurse, tends to one of her patients named* Gideon*, an elderly black man in the final stages of cancer and Alzheimer’s.*

Gideon remains silent and withdrawn, a behavior Annya finds comfortable, as it allows her to perform her duties without emotional entanglement. Their shared silence becomes an unspoken agreement—both guarded, both detached—a routine that shields them from the weight of an intimate connection.

But one day, Gideon breaks the silence, forcing Annya to confront more than just her patient’s traumatized past; but her own as well.**..

PAGES: 15

ACTORS: 2 main actors, and 2 extras.

I am looking for thoughts and critiques to help sharpen this story. Thank you!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-5l5jULvyUDVtURGUPzlNnTuVS3ho9Ag/view?usp=drivesdk

Hey, was hoping someone could give me feedback on my first draft of my short horror film. I guess I’m looking for feedback on story, characters, and writing style. Any feedback would be much appreciated, thank you!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vl8ryA4bkFRNZjFkKnDN2-ay-606zpLq/view?usp=drivesdk

Hi , r/ReadMyScript !

I’m currently developing an adventure series about an anthropomorphic deer named Shikra,

set in a world of talking animals with early 1900s vibes and a touch of modern humor.

The main plot is pretty intense—think betrayal, war, and a tragic hero arc—but I want to balance it with lighter, character-driven filler themes, especially in the first season.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NMCdrRu_nxnjBGYxwxxd4r_B_byT-Irz/view?usp=sharing

Please tell me what you think! (and if the stupid link works lmao)

[P.S, just finished the plan for episode two at a cafe to day, super exiting!]

this is my first ever script, and im going to be producing it into an audio-drama one-shot within the next month. but i wanted others to hopefully give me some feedback on the work in order to make sure im on the right track before i begin editing it.

heres the link:
Blind Date

A grieving woman orders an "At-Home Cloning Kit™" to bring back her dead boyfriend. The company promises "reunion in just 72 hours!" but when the fetus-like pod finally hatches in her bathtub, things go horribly wrong very quickly. A body horror short about grief, corporate exploitation, and letting go. (4 Pages)

As Seen On TV

Looking for feedback on first 10 pages and to see if it's too slow. I want to spend some time with the characters before things go bad.

Logline: After his Wife and Son go missing during a camping trip, Mason soon realizes that it wasn't someone but something behind their disappearance. 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GN3JChejFrjQ68fbaNYWdVUKIIlQpLQi/view?usp=sharing

Logline: A closeted bisexual finds a boyfriend when he revives a 90s TV tokusatsu hero, whose life was literally turned into fiction by his villains, who have flourished in his absence.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L4zw0QM1OwgWieFly3NV2Mj1u-cclP2T/view?usp=drivesdk

How are you?

One morning, I woke up with what I thought was a fantastic, mind-blowing idea about dreams and their negotiation. After a few days of confusion, I finally managed to put it down on paper. But halfway through, it hit me—I might be unintentionally creating a cheap version of Inception. 😅

So, I tried to shift focus, aiming to create something more unique. I poured everything into the dialogues, letting the characters' personalities and dynamics do the heavy lifting. I also worked hard to keep it "directable" with simple characters, locations, and objects—because let’s be honest, I’m nobody, and no one’s lining up to pick my scripts. It’s all packed into 19 pages now, but I’m still unsure if it works the way I envisioned.

Could you please take a look and let me know if it’s any good? I’d genuinely appreciate your feedback. I’m super self-critical, so please only read it when you have the time and patience.

Logline: A dream negotiator strikes a deal to trade nightmares for a happy dream, paying far more than necessary to fulfill a personal agenda.

Thanks so much for your time and thoughts!

Script Here

Logline: During Napoleon's retreat of 1812, a group of French soldiers get stalked by a vampire through the frigid Russian wilderness.

Just looking for general feedback. Hope you enjoy and thanks in advance!

EDIT - script removed, but let me know if you’re still interested in reading!

LINK

A guy goes on 3 dates! To me, it's a character study. Ideally it would rely heavily on the performances. There's a slight bit of ambiguity to the ending. Curious about any notes on the script or the story. I put a couple shot directions in there that were important to me.