/r/SapphicWriters

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A place for wlw to write and share writing, advice and (constructive) criticism. There isn't enough representation of queer women in the media, or in fiction, and this is a small place to change that!

Please introduce yourself in the Welcome thread!

General Rules

  1. Please only post content by, for, or about WLW
  2. Contribute and critique - Don’t be that gal who only posts for self-promotion.
  3. Don’t be a jerk - Personal attacks are not allowed.
  4. Racism, homophobia, biphobia, transphobia, misogyny or other forms of bigotry will not be tolerated.
  5. Be nice, write a lot, and have fun!

Post Submission Guidelines

  1. Smut is allowed, but please use the NSFW tag
  2. Original content only - Plagiarism is not allowed. Please label fanfic appropriately.
  3. Please flair your posts accordingly:
  • Discussion - for discussing the art and business of writing
  • Critique - for writing you want feedback on
  • Resource - links to writing tools, publication opportunities, etc.
  • Recommendation - media/content (for, by, or about WLW) that you recommend
  • Prompt - ideas to inspire writing
  • Meta - for stuff about r/SapphicWriters
  • Off-topic - for getting to know the community

Comments and Critiques

Please use constructive criticism.

  • Try to put more effort into it than just “Good job.”
  • What did you like/not like about the particular piece?
  • Try to focus on the positives (“I really like when you do this.”) instead of only giving negatives (“This was really bad.”)

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Authenticating your author website/newsletter

If any of you have a reader newsletter and you're struggling with getting the authentication done before February 1, I wrote a blog post with step-by-step instructions over on the Sapphic Quill, hoping to help my fellow writers.

https://thesapphicquill.com/how-to-authenticate-your-domain/

1 Comment
2024/01/16
21:27 UTC

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Promo opportunity: Sapphic Book Bingo 2024

Calling all authors of sapphic fiction!

You might have heard of the Sapphic Book Bingo. It's the big, year-long reading challenge I organize annually. Every year, thousands of readers are participating, while others use the recommended reading lists to find books for their to-be-read lists.

Right now, I'm putting together the book lists for the 37 categories of the 2024 Sapphic Book Bingo.

If you haven't yet submitted your book for inclusion in the 2024 Sapphic Book Bingo, please make sure you do it soon!

Every author of sapphic fiction can submit up to three book. The only requirements are that the books must be available on retailers such as Amazon or Apple Books, etc., and you must be willing to help share the kickoff post in January.

Here's the link to the submission form: https://airtable.com/appnpYI7fZuhNgPiZ/shrxeA6GWty95bZ22

0 Comments
2023/10/09
16:21 UTC

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advice for a flirting scene?

Hello,
I'm looking for some help with a romantic dinner scene in a lesbian fanfic I'm writing. It's a one shot and will probably be about 2K words long.

Context:
Person A is saved from a house fire by Person B (professional firefighter). Person A is curvy, very femme, quite rich, powerful politically. Person B is more butch, strong (she carried her out). Once she is out of the hospital, Person A invites Person B to dinner in a very fancy restaurant. Person A asks for consent to flirt, and Person B finds that question very attractive and says yes. Person A is mostly healed but has light scars from the burns and still has a bandage on her hand, and is a little awkward with cutlery because of it. Person B also saved her cat and took care of the cat while Person A was in the hospital.

I am now writing that dinner scene. I'm sapphic but aroace, and have no experience in flirting. What I have for now is Person A drinking wine without breaking eye contact. Could you share some ideas, maybe even words or phrases that you'd like to see in such a scene? Person A would be flirting more openly, but Person B is answering very favourably and starts flirting back.
In addition to heavy flirting, I also need to incorporate the fact that Person A did lose her house and feels some grief about it, and she possibly has trauma. I'm usually an angst writer, but this is meant to be light angst, light hurt/comfort + lots of fluff.

Thanks! <3

6 Comments
2022/09/02
18:28 UTC

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New to reddit - what do I do here?

Hi fellow sapphic authors! I just created this account as it was suggested to me, but I don't really know what to do here or how to use reddit to broaden my audience. Some of you have likely become experts, so throw a little love and advice my way!

Thanks ever so much!

1 Comment
2022/09/02
17:43 UTC

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Mentioning other books in a book review

So I have a question of preference. Do you think it's wrong or appropriate to mention a book you've read or liked in a book review of a different Author's book?

I'm on the fence, and would like to know what others think.

Fictional example A: "Great story, loved the action and world building. The comedy and tragedy tied in nicely, and I feel for Princess Noname. Reminds me of 'The Darkest Secret' by Jane Doe. Highly recommend."

Fictional example B: "Beautiful world, funny moments, but could have been a better read. Didn't like that the MC wants to bang every attractive women. A better story to read is 'Amaha, The Dragon Queen' by Doie Jane."

2 Comments
2022/08/25
22:23 UTC

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Got any sapphic (web)comic recommendations?

I just discovered this subreddit and I was wondering if anyone here is writing a sapphic webcomic/webtoon or has some good sapphic webcomics to recommend?

13 Comments
2022/08/24
11:27 UTC

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need feedback on a poem im working on

5 Comments
2022/08/21
09:53 UTC

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A horror sapphic writer seeking for writer friends

Hi all! My name is Lu, I am 23 years old and I am a writer. I have been writing since I was 15 years old (only in Spanish), but my English is advanced. I have written short stories, poetry and a short novel. My favorite genre is horror mixed with drama, but lately I have been interested in writing romance. I’d love to meet other writers and be friends. I am taken and also monogamous (I am not looking for anything romantic, just friendship).

27 Comments
2022/08/15
03:08 UTC

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Got any advice?

I want to write a sapphic fantasy book but my head empty and I don't have any ideas. Can anyone help me?

2 Comments
2022/08/05
17:53 UTC

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My debut Novel

Hi loves! I've been on just about every facebool group out there trying to find ways to help reach the community. Not a lot of traction there honestly.

I'm a author, and just released my debut novel. The Queen's Sister by Faye Love on Amazon.

It's a Sapphic, dark-fantasy, action, adventure with a lesbian lead. I would really appreciate if any of you are book worms to please check it out. There's a runaway elven Princess, a tossed away warrior queen. Some pathless Bandits, deadly overlords, magic, fairies, swords, fighting, poly emotions, and elusive goddesses. And some sexy, tender, love scenes.

I'll add a link too: I could just really use some honest reviews. I know it won't be for everyone, people seem conflicted over the main character. But love the elven princess. It's an allegory of patriarchal abuse and the downfall of it due to Queen Leslidia.

Thanks for reading my post!

The Queen's Sister (The Epsian Chronicles) https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B3575VJ8/ref=cm_sw_r_apan_42T4CWAQTMRDVXE3QBZ1

5 Comments
2022/08/04
16:25 UTC

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Starry Night at the Lighthouse

I wrote this a while ago but just found this subreddit and thought you might enjoy it.
Sorry if my grammar isn't great.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zWncbKpkhPDbGWgPeaxnAOXHRktxelGFncg4eul4PUE/edit?usp=sharing

1 Comment
2022/07/27
04:59 UTC

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New Podcast

Are you queer? Do like books? Are you an ally looking to expand your knowledge of queer literature? Well do we have the podcast for you. Welcome to The Labrys Library. https://open.spotify.com/show/16qoLdjP0omKKKLt7SzoGM

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2022/07/17
19:39 UTC

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any kpop fans in here? for pride month i made a video essay about an underrated yet incredibly bold piece of sapphic representation by mamamoo’s moonbyul. so far i’ve received great feedback but i’d love to get even more on how i broached the social commentary.

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2022/07/08
03:22 UTC

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Feedback on Sample Pages?

Hello!

Would anyone be able to give me feedback on the first chapter of my book? I’ve already made a post to the fantasy writers page, but since this work is a sapphic fantasy, I thought I’d post it here.

It's from the main character's perspective, who has lost her memories since her capture. The book begins with her in captivity in a series of caves, in a location unknown to her and the others that she is with.

I'm looking for glaring errors or thematic/stylistic issues within this sample since my work has been rejected a couple of times by agents so far.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v246CNIA6XnHK9afUFCo6CtdXvLpzxnt-_GD6YHq0n8/edit

2 Comments
2022/06/20
01:21 UTC

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The Need to Feel

I wield the shower. The water rolls off my cheeks. When tears won’t come out.

0 Comments
2022/06/07
16:09 UTC

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The Grass Widow by Nanci Little

Hi everyone :). Has anyone read by chance The Grass Widow by Nanci Little? I'm not american and there are some parts of the story that I would like to discuss for a better understanding. Thank you :)

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2022/05/18
21:00 UTC

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This is my rough draft

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2022/05/03
18:07 UTC

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Join Us!

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2022/04/29
16:18 UTC

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Been Writing in a wholesome Romance Style Recently, so here's an exert from: "Cute Story! (Lesley x Marsy)"

4 Comments
2022/04/17
20:29 UTC

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Advice for someone new to sharing!

Hi. I’ve been writing short stories for a long time, mainly NSFW, WLW stories, but have never been brave enough to let anyone read them. I think I’m ready to share with this lovely community and get some feedback and hopefully improve my writing. What is the best way to upload? I see some people post long passages but others use AO3 and other sites. What do people prefer? Thank you

2 Comments
2022/01/08
10:12 UTC

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I’m writing a short lesbian romance novel, any advice based on this outline?

A middle aged Swiss woman (very queer) in San Fransisco decides to rent out a room in her house, specifies the renter has to be queer and/or an ally. A younger Canadian immigrant sees the ad and jumps at the opportunity, she’s either gay or bi.

I’m doing a cliche landlady romance, so you have the typical beats such as awkward exchanges and flirting.

The younger woman decides to make a move by driving to Golden Gate Park and get some sexy pictures taken from the shoulders up.

Once they’re finally an item, we meet a friend of her’s named Stephen, who’s a short, queer asshole who stirs up some drama. We see the landlady character is often shy and not very talkative. We meet her friends, one being a Hungarian queer woman she knew from boarding school.

A couple things I want to do is the two going to a cottage with the school friend and her partner, and the younger woman treats the landlady’s sunburns with aloe. And the landlady encourages her to cook and be confident in the kitchen, tells her to make tandoori chicken.

They visit the girl’s family in Canada and we meet her adopted sister (nerdy trans femme) and her mom, who’s very old fashioned but not a monster.

It’s pretty bare bones, and the ending doesn’t exist.

However, I want to do the Game of Thrones thing and have different characters narrate different chapters. Which could be a lot of fun.

And I do plan on making cultural references when applicable

10 Comments
2021/10/17
12:56 UTC

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Would I be ostracized from the community for writing porn?

4 Comments
2021/10/14
08:37 UTC

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I FOUND THIS PROMPT ON PINTEREST PLEASE MAKE IT GAY

You're the daughter of a notorious gang of thieves who have just kidnapped a noblewoman. In a bought of pity (and this wasn't in the prompt but I totally want it to be because she was pretty too lmao), you give her warm clothes and help her escape. She promises to remember your kindness, and runs off into the night. Now, years later, the worst winter that the land has ever seen is threatening the lives of everyone around you. But you, you seem to be immune. For it wasn't just some girl you saved all that time ago. It was the Snow Queen. And she does remember you.

7 Comments
2021/09/26
19:13 UTC

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Overwhelm Me

Overwhelm me.

I want your words, first,

quick-sparking promise, your eyes flint from across the room,

across the divide, the distance is nothing because

you still reach me.

I want your touch, next,

soft, hot, skin aglow, ablaze, and I want-

give me your mouth, next,

finally,

swallowing my thoughts until I have nothing left

but you.

2 Comments
2021/08/24
02:50 UTC

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I wrote a script!

Hey everyone!

I just finished writing my first script! It was strongly inspired by my own life, so the opinion and reception of the community is very important to me.

It's about a girl dealing with her feelings for her roommate and acknowledging her sexuality; needless to say there are LGBTQ+ themes, along with women of color and minor mentions of religion. The main character identifies as asexual but gets confused once she starts experiencing sexual desire. It's 20 pages, and I would greatly appreciate any feedback. Particularly about the representation and story. 

Thank you so much for your time!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Nrhi2G4ipe5IEOpRCQg85egVw-aktbAIQn-kp13qHPg/edit?usp=sharing

8 Comments
2021/07/09
17:41 UTC

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