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[Lyrics] 12:14 on Magnolia

Emily Gold is one of the beautiful angels in heaven

Me stopping the representin it's no telling

When will I be with them is what I be thinkin

In life I'm always swimming while sinking

To hugging Tara Condell I'm wishing

To bring reunited with my best friend Mara I'm dreaming

Came true in dreams

Waking up it's not what it seems

I was granted cosmic consciousness when I didn't deserve it

Jesus legacy I can never disrespect it

Suicide I never fully commit to it

Tried but Life said no but to this life get to it

I plunged in life in 24 so hard it would wake Kobe up from that precious grave

When Im alone I got so much to say

I was supposed to be homeless in December

My landlord I'll never leave her

At times I be having feelings

But to those it's a ceiling

Least I bursted through with it came to enlightenment

Every Tuesday payday it's an excitement

Still be getting tired of working

That Bi Polar bike in my mind still riding

But at least I'm taking my meds each day

I just wanna connect with Yocheved Goaurie's soul everyday

Abraham K Biggs was hurting

To me he was a honest person

Christine Woo was so overwhelmed who could judge her

Kate Spade I give it up for her

August Ames is shining in paradise best believe

The way I love them gives me peace

Living for them even when I'm stiff as a nail

Leaving them will be hell

I can juggle my oversentimental and obsessions

Truth be told I been a reddit legend

Not Rakim

But least I was looking out for foe en them

I got lyrics that spands over a hundred pages

In this life sometimes get depressed while going through these stages

Supposed to be asleep working graveyard but fuck it I'ma give it up for Kagney

Rest easy sweetie

She was an angel if you ask me

All the other porn stars who ended their lives just hoping they are free

Cats out the bag but who's dealing with the litter

Trying my best not to be the eternal quitter

A natural defeatist

On Craigslist searching at least I'm not on R Kelly's list

A young soul but my spirit is past 40

When I die I'm craving Tara Condell and Mara will greet me

Then kissing St Peter on his hands

Forever alone people will only understand

My legacy is lyrical food you do the dishes

Any day I can swim with the fishes

Life's ocean I swam in pangeas Atlantic

Even back stroked it

I've been to Pacific that Michael Phelps havent swam in

I'm just hoping my heart is pure in the end

Fat lady sing whenever you like

Ethica I'll see you on the other side

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2025/01/31
20:14 UTC

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[Lyrics] Wrath of the king of gods

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2025/01/31
06:35 UTC

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Cassie [Lyrics]

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2025/01/31
05:03 UTC

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Random Nonsense That Rhymes - Part 1 (2022) Colorized [Lyrics]

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2025/01/31
05:01 UTC

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Eyes [Lyrics]

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2025/01/31
05:00 UTC

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[lyrics] spirit cold(opinions?)

[intro] I feel my soul, it’s gone cold. So many stories are left untold. A whisper through the wind, how will I be forgiven? [verse] I’ve fallen short, I don’t talk to you as much as I should, it started to feel like a last resort. I’m sorry for how I’ve been living, falling into my sin. I know I’ve been distant, I’m traveling a broken road, can you lead me home? [chorus] The oceans are deep, the tide keeps pulling at me. Can you lift me up? Set me free? My spirit longs to be wandering in the trees But it’s freezing over, it won’t let me speak. [verse] I know I should pick my Bible off of the shelf, talk to my creator but it feels like I’m going through hell. Give me the strength to stand in the sea, and let me know you’re right beside me. I’m going crazy, running through the trees, let me find a piece of you within me [chorus] The waters are pulling me under, it fades to black. Im five minutes away from never turning back. I lost myself within the deep Help me God. Set me free. [bridge] There’s a bridge between you and me, but the waves are taking me under, I cannot breathe But you grab my hand and pull me up, you know I’m broken, I was made into a mess, feeling unworthy of your forgiveness But you tell me that I was created by a God who made the oceans deep, you grabbed the chains that imprisoned me and you set me free [chorus] I know there’s a God, one that loves me. He created the waters that were meant to shape me how I was meant to be What once was cold can finally see A spirit cold, is a spirit in need [outro] Oh i was in need, you set me free You set my soul on fire, you knew what i need You forgave me

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2025/01/30
21:05 UTC

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[lyrics] The Two Be Goose Steppin’

TAKE THESE AND MAKE SOMETHING BETTER and brilliant… catchy! Record it. Link it. SPREAD IT. Let these people know they will be held accountable. And by these people I refer specifically to no actual person who has ever existed. These lyrics are entirely the work of Imagination and shared as art, free speech, poetry so that others can make great music with them. They are owned by everyone. In fact, I found them somewhere else and pasted them here. He want to be a big man But he know he a small man In private he dress up and do the can can He all cartoony like gruncle Stan Stan. He gotta rich friend he think the man man His rich friend he love the klan klan

The two be goose steppin’ The two be goose steppin’

In the mornin’ he pulling da fire alarma He just trying to scare you and make up more trauma He can’t live without all dat drama He won’t eat middle eastern cause he says he hates dat schwarma. Bad things gonna come back on him because of dat karma

The two be goose steppin’ The two be goose steppin’

He talkin’ real loud, tryna sound all tough But we all know he cain’t sell that rough stuff Big shoes, big coat, but he still bluff bluff He be flexin’ like he diamond, but he straight Hufflepuff Million dollar this that, but it all fake fake Runnin’ round town like he pushin’ that weight weight Luigi comin’ Luigi comin’ He scared of the dark, leave a night light on late Tryna act all brave but his heart pumpin’ shake shake Luigi comin’ Luigi comin’ ‘cause

The two be goose steppin’ The two be goose steppin’

He say he run the block, but he really just rent it Tried to buy a Rolex, but the price he couldn’t dent it All talk, no walk, that’s how he designed it Tryna boss up but his clout been rewinded He scared of his shadow, jumpin’ left and right Actin’ like a king but he cryin’ every night Luigi comin’

Say he got power, but his grip too light He can’t handle heat, better step outta sight

The two be goose steppin’ The two be goose steppin’

He got a lil’ squad, they be all yes men Sayin’ “yes sir,” but they all just pretend He be braggin’ ‘bout his riches, but he can’t even spend Tryna swing big, but his punches don’t extend Talk about respect but he ain’t earned none Still runnin’ from the truth like he stole some . Lookin’ in the mirror, see a fraud, not a don Tryna build an empire but the bricks all gone

The two be goose steppin’ The two be goose steppin’

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2025/01/30
01:14 UTC

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[lyrics]

Hey so I’m not sure I’ve I’ve used the right tag (sorry if I haven’t) but here are some lyrics I’ve written and it would be cool for others to collaborate. I’ll write the first verse.

Battle cries white lies, said you’d give your heart if I gave you mine. Should’ve known your a thief of love, I was oblivious to the signs that were given from above. should’ve realise at the time, the shoulder you gave me was cold, now I’m sitting here reminiscing about the person I used to know.

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2025/01/28
21:14 UTC

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[Lyrics] Fast, Forward

Evening shelters scandals

Who set footprints by the sea

And peter on two-by-two

Like awful things our parents do

I part your hair, you look at me,

One eyebrow entertains

Should the devil fall upon us

Let him choke on our remains

Scatter seeds haphazard

We pray the good ones grew

As I'm spooning with my pillow

I am holding on to you

Sea glass on the mirror

That was put up last July

You had the nerve to pry it off

While grazing from your pastry trough

I call your name, you turn away

Our breakfast pantomimed

Now a devil closes in on us,

There's no route left unmined

Hear the grinding gears and engines

Of a distant wrecking crew

As I punch out every window

I'll be saluting you

Mid-tier AI approximation of what this would sound like

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2025/01/26
03:49 UTC

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[Lyrics] Tape My Eyes

*Verse 1

At night, I'm losing my mind.
Low light playing tricks on my eyes.
Blink twice, something's not right.
Stay awake, I'll tape my eyes.
Paranoia begins to set in.
Got a feeling the walls are cavin'.
This game I wasn't made for playin'.
Those whispers, what are they sayin'?

*Pre Chorus

"Here, in the dark,
you will always fall apart."
But I, I will fight.
And tonight I'll tape my eyes,
so that I can face them.

Chorus

You won't take me.
You can't break me.
I'll stay alive,
as long as I tape my –

*Verse 2

Feel the panic as the fear begins to set in.
Head is spinnin'.
See them taunting from the edges of my vision.
Faces grinnin'.
Can't escape, I always hear them whisperin'.
"There is no winnin'."
Deprivation's got me making bad decisions...
I'll tape my eyes.
At night, I'm losing my mind.
Blink twice, something's not right.
Got a feeling the walls are cavin'.
Those whispers, what are they sayin'?

*Pre Chorus

"Here, in the dark,
you will always fall apart."
But I, I will fight.
And tonight I'll tape my eyes,
so that I can face them.

*Chorus

You won't take me.
You can't break me.
I'll stay alive,
as long as I tape my –

*Bridge

Instrumental

*Chorus 2

Tape my –
Tape my –
I'll tape my –
Tape my –
(×2)

Outro

Paranoia begins to set in. (Head is spinnin')
This game I wasn't meant for playin'. (There is no winnin')
Low light playing tricks on my eyes. (Faces grinnin')
Stay awake, I'll tape my eyes.

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2025/01/25
17:32 UTC

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[lyrics] Familiarity

Verse 1

Familiarity can breach contempt, because you know what’s under the surface.

But when it comes to yourself you don’t think it applies,

don’t wonder where your lies subside. I know that you know that I know I’m not heartless inside.

I stick to what I know not what’s right, Who can blame me It’s only human nature right?

Chorus

Working like machinery to keep myself afloat I need the familiarity to find comfort within the toxicity.

Returning to the cycle to feel something to replace the numbness felt within,

gold medals won’t shine to say I win, but what’s the point of breathing if I don’t have something to let me live?

Verse 2

Over and over and over again, facing the immortal detriment disallowing me to rest,

I need the coping to survive, as it’s a loss either way if I live or die. grasping onto what’s wrong feels so right.

Like an ace from a dec of cards, with the unhealthiness in its habit I’m able to stay standing.

As you can go from one to eleven, the pathway to hell feels like heaven. The way to hell seems like heaven even when it’s hell itself.

Chorus

Working like machinery to keep myself afloat I need the familiarity to find comfort within the toxicity.

Returning to the cycle to feel something to replace the numbness felt within,

gold medals won’t shine to say I win, but what’s the point of breathing if I don’t have something to let me live?

Verse 3 Familiarity can breach contempt, I’ll understand if I’m the child my parents regret.

Pathways to hell feel like heaven. using these methods you go from one to eleven.

I’m suffer without the illusion of my shield, but how can I live with knowing what’s actually real? Let me live not only breathe to become real.

Chorus

Working like machinery to keep myself afloat I need the familiarity to find comfort within the toxicity.

Returning to the cycle to feel something to replace the numbness felt within,

gold medals won’t shine to say I win, but what’s the point of breathing if I don’t have something to let me live?

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2025/01/25
10:57 UTC

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[Lyrics] [Discussion] 10/6 by He is I

An unreleased track, currently working on an intro. One of my more lyrical tracks, lmk what your favorite line was

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2025/01/24
18:38 UTC

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[Lyrics] Numb

*Chorus

I've bled all I can.
I can no longer feel my hands.
Are they gone? (×2)
I can no longer feel my hands.
I feel numb. (×2)
I can no longer feel my hands.

*Verse 1

I have tried so many times.
Think I finally lost my mind.
Nothing worked.
Always had a losing hand.
And here I thought I had a plan,
but it failed.
I've got nowhere left to go.
Can't survive this on my own.
But I am all alone.

*Bridge

Dear friend, do remember me
as I was before I let
my own brain get the best of me, please. (×2)

*Verse 2

I thought that I could make ammends.
But I've already seen the end.
I am gone.
In the shadows, now I stand.
Think I missed my final chance.
I am gone.
There is nowhere left to hide.
I just wanna close my eyes.
I know that I'm out of time.

*Chorus

I've bled all I can.
I can no longer feel my hands.
Are they gone? (×2)
I can no longer feel my hands.
I feel numb. (×2)
I can no longer feel my hands.

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2025/01/23
15:39 UTC

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[Lyrics] God Lay Dying - I Gotta Guy

I had a guy, his name was Rory

looked as sweet as apple pie

always loved to tell a story

every single word a lie

where's the money that you owe me

that you said you'd pay me soon?

who's the gal that you were kissing

in the park that afternoon?

I had a guy, his name was Ryan

looked as sweet as sweet can be

he was always lyin' lyin'

every word he said to me

why'd you say that you were sick then

go out drinking on the town?

who's the gal that you were kissing

in the park when the sun went down?

I gotta guy his name's the devil

never lies and never late

never tells me what to do and

never tells me not to hate

handsome Rory, handsome Ryan

they'll be lost and never found

they'll be doing lots of lyin'

lyin' in the cold, cold ground.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=77peUCNs-Qk

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2025/01/23
05:19 UTC

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[Lyrics] "Monsters Nearby". Feel like something's missing.

*Verse

I've been feelin restless lately.
Rewinding time, forward, pause, playing
all the memories that made me.
Who am I?
Just a sum of thoughts and actions.
Some of them fantastic,
some I wish to take back, but –
Here I am.
Schrödinger's cat, suspended state.
Am I alive or dead?
I just know I'm wide awake.
My paralysis is of a different kind.
My mind begins to wander,
and then the thoughts control my eyes.
I try to analyze and break it into parts.
But it seems the more I deconstruct,
the more I fall apart.
It's a game that I wasn't made to play.
I would rather fall asleep and fade away, but –

*Chorus

There's monsters nearby,
so I can't rest now.
They're inside my mind,
and I can't put 'em down.
There's monsters nearby,
no I can't rest now.

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2025/01/22
15:47 UTC

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[Lyrics] A Letter to the Great Emily Gold

Emily how are doing in heaven?

I can picture them angels singing

With those heavenly sounds while you dancing

For you're family I'm forever praying

Not sure what led up to you're ascension

For uplifting you're name I got that eternal motivation

Sending these words up

Hoping I can see you when it's my time to go up

I know you're in a great place

You know I'm good while in this rat race

When I was broke facing homelessness I was still uplifting and remembering you're legacy

That Tik Tok video of you singing means so much to me

You seemed so happy

Same how I see you in eternity

I'll admit it I wanted to travel in that video to spend quality time with you

Fantasizing of laughing and joking and being silly with you

Over sentimental but Lord knows I care about you

Developing a love for you is the God's honest truth

Day after you went to heaven

I seen some of you're friends crying

I even extended my soul out to you're parents and you're brother

So bad I wanted to be the big brother towards you're brother

Me and you're family I was picturing us all crying in special memory of you

But at least I received those two shoulder taps from you

That day I could've crashed on the freeway

You and Moonie made sure I made it safe while doing 80 on the freeway

I was exhausted feeling like I let you down Emily

Knowing I was near where you ascended that day was hurting me

I just wanted to be with there for you and everyone that knew you

Ascending before 2025 I'll never forget you

No matter what happens in life I promise to stay Gold

Rest in peace I love you Emily Gold

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2025/01/22
04:45 UTC

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[Lyrics] Birdwatching

Verse 1

A thousand miles an hour

Down country lanes in the dark

The river's burst it's banks and

You're running out of time

Verse 2

Crept upon me, silent

A cougar in the woods

Sowing discontentment

Under our feathers

Chorus

Oh I

I'm still here

I'm still here

Oh I

I'm still here

I'm still here

Verse 3

Saw you on the cameras

Eyes bathed in infrared

Stiff as a corpse, you

Sit still and stare

Verse 4

Your false skin peeled off

I'm safe, stuck on the bank

Gone was the weight that

Kept you coming back

Chorus

Oh I

I'm still here

I'm still here

Oh I

I'm still here

I'm still here

Outro

Phone off the hook

Poured me down the drain

As I watch you fly

I'm still here

I'm still here

I'm still here

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2025/01/22
00:19 UTC

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[Lyrics] I'd like some feedback, please. "One Yes Away".

Seeing this in a neotraditional country, Texas Country, or Americana type of thing...

One Yes Away

V1:

Mesmerized by an angel that caught my eye
feelings that caught me by surprise
got up the courage to ask her out one day
and hoped our first date was One Yes Away

V2:

Time went on as it's known to do
We had more dates and my feelings grew
I confessed my love to her that day
and wanted my girlfriend to be One Yes Away

V3:

The two of us out on a moonlit night
A ring in my pocket, the time just felt right
Nervous and on one knee I asked her that day
and yearned for a fiancée who was One Yes Away

V4:

She walks down the aisle to the music's pace
In her wedding gown, flowing with angelic grace
Ready to exchange vows with her that day
I knew that my wife was One Yes Away

V5:

The start of this beautiful life
with my family and beautiful wife
began with a question asked that day
where the answer was one yes away

Out:

Yeah, the answer was one yes away
The answer was one yes away
And she said yes

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2025/01/20
17:36 UTC

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[discussion]I just made a community

I just created a community for small time rappers.people with less than 100 followers. Maybe looking for advice in the music industry. You don’t only have to do rap.it’s for all musicians and lyricists . Please join I’ll like up everyone’s music who joins.

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2025/01/20
12:45 UTC

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[Lyrics] A Letter to Emily Gold

I do this for Emily

Rest easy sweetie

Been months since I heard from the afterlife version of you

Niggas know I did all that I could to show that I cared about you

I wanted to be there for you're family but they were resistant

I mean really bad but I was blinded couldn't see the hesitance

I was picturing being there for them at 3 am with all of us crying in unison

Grieving while fantasizing

Forseeing hugging all you're family members

I even had high hopes of being one of you're family members

Even though I'm black I can pass for white

I'm just praying you're at peace from the other side

You went from living and enjoying life to rocking a hailo

God bless you're soul

Praying it's not troubled

Angel wings on you're back I know it's a couple

You're light now shining forever

E=MC squared equals forever

16 forever and to beyond

Now you're apart of God's song

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2025/01/20
12:39 UTC

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[Lyrics] Tiny Brain

Tiny Brain The sun is shining through the clouds Warming life on the ground Feeling blue and feeling down My words never make a sound

Tiny brain Tiny Brain Don't you know I got a Tiny brain Tiny Brain Tiny Brain And it all just looks the same

I can't begin to comprehend I can't Reason Fathom or understand Well I can move but I can't get around I'm just lost and waiting to be found

Tiny Brain Tiny Brain Don't you know I got a tiny brain Tiny Brain Tiny Brain I think just forgot my name

No two days are ever the same Like the turning of a new page The world keeps turning So time can change

Tiny Brain Tiny Brain Well I know I got a Tiny Brain Tiny Brain Tiny Brain How did I get on this plane?

Tiny Brain Tiny Brain Now you know I got tiny brain Tiny Brain Tiny Brain And I'm just gonna play my games

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2025/01/20
06:25 UTC

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[Lyrics] God Lay Dying - My Mind Is A City

A stranger in my home

I faced the world alone

an exile in a land

that I could never understand

the words that people spoke

would twist and curl like smoke

and any shape they made

was meaningless and all would fade

and my mind is a city and all of its streets are on fire

and that fire is fuelled by the innocent dreams of the young

and my life is a song to be sung by celestial choir

and the demons have conquered the angels and cut out their tongues

I wandered far and wide

without a map or guide

cast out by everyone

I never knew what I had done

I wandered with no aim

the world was all the same

no matter where I went

the very air malevolent

and my mind is a city and all of its streets are on fire

and that fire is fuelled by the innocent dreams of the young

and my life is a song to be sung by celestial choir

and the demons have conquered the angels and cut out their tongues

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bhNSfd3HjKk

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2025/01/19
15:24 UTC

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[lyrics] first time posting here

First time posting and looking for any and all feedback! Can take the bad with the good, no softy here. Really trying to find a place that pushes me and helps me progress!

[Lynchpin]

I keep hiding parts of myself,
The parts I think would give you hell,
by night I hunt with lions,
By morning just a lamb.
And these parts that I keep hiding,
Are the parts you walk beside,
I’m not trying to fall in patterns,
But I can’t help to fall and hide.

Every day I try hard to tell myself
Remember where you’ve been
Never forget the things that you’r forced to shelf\

I’ve been to places I feared
When I was a comfort for hire.
And saw the ghosts that I made up
share beds with the liars.
And its a real funny thing,
When you harvest self hate.
You can make the grave think,
it showed up to late\

[chorus] Of the few things that I’m certain,
I’m the lynchpin of our burden
I’ve felt cursed, angry, and scared.
What could I have left to give?
I felt alone and unhinged…
So I’ll hide so many secrets on this page.
I had so many secrets for us to hate. \

I’ve held barkeeps who tremble;
When they’ve gotta go home.
I cried in alleys with fools,
So they don’t, don’t cry alone.
Sleepwalking through my youth,
Became some kind of game.
Found troubled bar room strangers
To give refuge a new name \

[chorus]

[bridge] They say to stand yourself up
Dust off and look for thrills,
It comes off as desperate
But it was better than pills
walking a line;
thought it was my cross to bare.
And now when I look in the mirror
Its us I see in there \

[chorus]

So I’m older now
My bones, oh they hurt.
But for 40 years I’ve handled
Keeping that frame out of the dirt
But are all my memories nightmares?
Have I mourned that little kid?
I think I’d rather look to mine
Now that I’m dying to live \

[chorus]

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2025/01/17
22:45 UTC

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[Lyrics] The Things that Last

I believe in clean breaks
I believe in walkin' away
From the things that have drug our souls down.
So deep we had to crawl up through the ground.

I believe that regrets.
Are just lessons that were tougher to learn.
I believe that sometimes it is best.
That some bridges were better left burned.

Movin' on it ain't easy to do.
Even with a ramblin' heart through and through.
You learn that things only glitter when new.
But those that last have the greatest value.

I believe in fresh starts.
But also in friends till the end.
And I believe that when our ways part.
We'll meet up at some far distant bend.

Forever ain't too far.
But tomorrow's forever away.
Promise somewhere in your heart.
There's a place that I always will stay.

Movin' on it ain't easy to do.
Even with a ramblin' heart through and through.
You learn that things only glitter when new.
But those that last have t he greatest value.

Those that last have the greatest value.

Our love had the greatest value.

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2025/01/17
20:53 UTC

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[Lyrics] need some feedback on these lyrics I wrote :)

I saw in a dream, or was it a nightmare? They're making it seem, my morals are unfair. Such twisted faits, and motions that stare. I thought you would be, better off when im not there. I just cant wait to care.

I bear a few responsibilities I feel a pull on my capillaries Theyre not quite working as intended My blood is embedded

I can see what's tugging, in my peripheries. I make myself believe its out of sight. So foolish i call those who follow the bright.

When i was young i wanted to dance, But the freedom of dancing comes at a price.

So why Do i envy Three sweet molten wings


I walk through the haze, the air feels too thin.
Their lungs are churning, they're drowned kin Turbulent flight, a seat on a kite. Each step that I take, feels heavier still,
But silence is safe, and I swallow the thrill.

The whispers of untold thoughts, inside Telling me truths that my mind hides.
The walls, they are closing, the weight’s pulling tight, But I shield my eyes from the lavender light.


Chorus :

So why
Do I envy
Three sweet molten wings?
Why
Can’t I steady
The pull of broken strings?


Sarah says "dont stay in the skies, just cling to the ground" Afraid of the heights, of the crash, of the sound.
The embers ignite, but they’re doused in my fear,
I’m trapped in the sight, but the end feels near.
The nightmares grow frequent, my mind is seered Afraid to confront the shape of my fears.
The fire could burn me, the wings may decay,
But the ashes might show me a brighter day.
My wrinkles feel young and im told i should stay.


Chorus :

So why
Do I envy
Three sweet molten wings?
Why
Do I bury
The truth that freedom brings? She smells like yearning, and sweetened tears, but i fear thats beyond my years.

The twisted fate, of those who oppose. Their status quos

3 Comments
2025/01/17
07:20 UTC

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[Discussion] How do I start rapping/singing?

Intro:

Hey guys! Im 14 and iv been making music since I was 7 using FL Studio, recently I thought the only thing my music needs is singing/rap.

what im going to be

But im not going to be like most modern day rappers. In the old days rap was educational to let people know what was going on, F tha police was made because the police was racist against blacks and would arrest blacks for no reason just because they r black, not exactly like that but u get what I mean. And thats what I wanna be, informative rap

Negativity in the music community

Most modern day rappers dont get this and just say a bunch of stuff that dont even make sense and fake stuff that prob doesn't happen to em just cuz thats what was big and is big. They think they r cool n will get big just cuz they say they in a gang in the hood w hoez but chances are none of that is true, and so rap because this sorta fake thing, and the music community is so negative abt new ideas n especially singing n rap for whatev reason, like they think everything is cringe now and u cant express yo self ) Im not trying to hate against rappers but imo its not as good as it used to be, I personally like old rap, but the music community is def negative abt upcoming rappers expression n all that

Conclusion:

anyways idk if I went off topic but anyways, I wnna be like the old rappers, informing people abt the world today and my life, giving people important lessons and info abt life, like in the old days, which is where I got the name "Current State" from, it means the current state of us, everything. And to express it with music.

Unfortunately I cant brand it as that since its already taken, if anyone has any ideas for a brand PLEASE lmk, but maybe it could be an album name, as of rn my brand is pizzasbeats but I wanna change it if I get into rap

what do I do?

question 1: once I start making raps, how do I sell em and publish em (other than social media.) without a music distributor, where do I start?

question 2: How do I make em ryhme? And y does my brain feel so frozen? I cant think of anything let alone make it ryhme n make it sound good

any tips or anything would be much appreciated, thanks for reading

6 Comments
2025/01/17
04:00 UTC

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[Lyrics] Just threw this together. It's a little aggressive but I like it. The bars are not clear cut, nor designed to easily flow. Still, if anyone wants to try it out, please do and send me a recording of you rapping! Then maybe we can compare!

I shit in the sink call it a sick kink when I sink in my spit in the blink of an eye. I'm down to drown in the drink instead of letting it bring me to the brink of drunk where I finger your ring. I figure I'd bring a lesbian chick called Ding, so she could scissor my dong. With a flick of my wand, I'll turn yen to won, I've yet to want my hip to waste. White fucker debased, it's a racist debate between playmates, you'll have to match the pace at which they hastily paste hate on pastel coloured porcelain plates, laced with parts partially placed in parcels shaped in wide slates folded in drapes with a patented pattern of grapes.

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2025/01/15
19:30 UTC

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[Lyrics] Rate My Lyrics Out Of 16?!.

Hello, I am enquiring your opinions about 2 rhapsodies I’ve created of my choice…

Be as brutally honest as possible within reason haha, I just need to know what level I’m at currently…

Can you please rate between 0 to 16 (0/16) including your feedback for A) and b) if you would be so kind…

Thank you for reading and hopefully I am a decent lyricist at least ha…

A) Hell & Back:

• What would I do without musical therapy? • I’d probably be killed by a beautiful melody • Pen-game is vocab and a suitable remedy • And am coming at you’s on usable energy • This is what’ll happen when the willpower
• Has you still standing like The Twin Towers • Working on my rhymes for a whole 6 hours • Nonstop unless the beat already devoured • You should consider me as a heavyweight • Butterflies in your stomach or a bellyache • Meditate, medicate or a fully empty plate • This doesn’t really seem to matter anyway • Can still be reliant upon the muscle memory • I remembered in training I’d struggle terribly • Get lifted by performing push-ups mentally • The G.O.A.T Verse is gunna’ hustle enemies • The one who’d have the gangsters in shock • Mouths wide open like a fu**ing big yawn • Splitting jaws until they’ve been dislodged • Being charged for murder is such a rip-off • I was ten toes down whilst finding my feet • Going places where my spine didn’t reach • That’s to Hell and back with sighing relief • Now my heads in a cloud and dying to see • These lyricists who’re just not on my level • Need to negotiate peace-talks to the Devil • ‘Cause it makes ‘em wanna’ boil the kettle • To then start pouring it all over my freckles • It’d take an awful lot to put me in retirement
• For out there, I know I have a secret admirer • Plus, got someone who’s squeezing the firer • Keep ‘em at bay before am seeking asylums

B) Safety:

• You’re gunna’ shoot me and then disappear? • My gang members call that a misdemeanour • Why you gotta’ poke your nose and interfere? • Never been caught but it’s getting slipperier • Am a long way away from the rainy daydream • ‘Cause I can get excited like having A.D.H.D • I was scared **itless by the crazy mainstream • And now I wanna’ have sex with a rapey lady • Dodging bullets when it comes to gunshots • Thought for my safety and that just unlocks • So I have to be strong enough as a shook one • To not lose composure if am in the glovebox • You know my game is somewhat respectable • I can make a bad situation seem preventable • For those who are weakened and susceptible • You can still make it without the conventional

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2025/01/15
15:16 UTC

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[Lyrics] God Lay Dying - I Am Gone

Do not look for me

in the cry of a baby

in the trees cool and shady

in the calm that comes at dawn

do not look for me

in the pale pure starlight

of a still, silent midnight

I am gone, oh I am gone

would that I could stay

as a spirit beside you

to watch over and guide you

keep you ever in my sight

would that I could stay

but I know though it pains me

you would have me speak plainly

not pretend that day is night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74rOIbiaipU

0 Comments
2025/01/15
10:42 UTC

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[Lyrics] The Line

Remember all the things we did to get over the line

Remember all the things we lost to cross the finish line

Remember all the songs we sung but we forgot the lines

Was it all worth it now that you have crossed the [breath] line?

0 Comments
2025/01/15
07:41 UTC

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