/r/LetsPlayCritiques

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A subreddit made for YouTube creators to come together to help each other out by giving and receiving feedback!

Dedicated to the creation and improvement of Let's Plays

This subreddit is focused on critique and criticism. Much like Feedback Fridays on r/LetsPlay this is based on give and take. We need to hear your voice on submissions!

Try to find a video that hasn't received any feedback yet as a starting point. Everyone can offer useful criticism, so even if you are new, make sure to jump in and speak out about what you liked, what you didn't like, and what you'd like to see in each submitted video!

  • You must provide useful feedback on at least 2 other submissions within the last week before posting each video!
    Failure to do so can result in temporary or permanent bans.

We are currently working on a moderator bot that will enforce this rule and highlight top feedback providers so make sure to be helpful! It's the life blood of this sub!

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/r/LetsPlayCritiques

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HotS (moba) match + additional comments, what do you think? :)

0 Comments
2024/04/27
21:55 UTC

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Fortnite letsplay w/ a friend

Fortnite - Freaky Biden And The Chain Diddlers Of Doom https://youtu.be/nsT8TwhP-eA Two glaring issues I know I have are my audio, and that in this video specifically the intro bit goes on for a little too long. Im doing videos like this more as a fun hobby, because I like editing, rather than a long term career goal, so I’ll never take it 100% seriously. But maybe averaging a few hundred views or so per video would be nice. These days I don’t really know how to treat the algorithm to get the videos seen, though, so any feedback would be appreciated

0 Comments
2024/04/18
23:13 UTC

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Decided do add some storytelling to the videos, what do you think? What would you change?

1 Comment
2024/04/17
07:50 UTC

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Civilization VI Critique Request

Civilization VI timelapse and commentary - This is a new series and technique that I'm trying out. I'm fairly happy with the short videos but would welcome any feedback as it's tough to gain any feedback out there or interaction. <3 from the HighScoresHighStakes podcast.

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2024/04/16
14:47 UTC

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Baldur’s Gate 3 - Playthrough, what more can I do??

Baldur’s Gate 3 Playthrough

Hi everyone! Hope you’re doing well.

Our channel is BerriNCherri. It involves me, Berri and my best friend Cherri playing games together, individually or sometimes with other friends.

This playlist is a dual playthrough aka both Cherri and I play baldur’s gate 3 together. I put a lot of work in these videos, I think they’re hilarious, and I also include shorts for each video. They also link to livestreams as our videos are edited after we livestream, and I put together all the interesting and important parts.

I really just need specific criticism about what more we could do together, or if what we’re doing is enough.

Thanks 😊

4 Comments
2024/04/11
19:56 UTC

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A little further down the road...comments, advice?

Hello! I posted here a while back when I started doing Let's Plays. I'm a bit further in now, and growing...slowly...pretty dang slowly actually but STILL. So, I'm nearly done with a 100% playthrough of Mario Sunshine. This is my latest episode, and I'd appreciate any advice!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfLAq2lyQpw

3 Comments
2024/04/11
02:18 UTC

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Critique me on my first Minecraft let’s play.

1 Comment
2024/04/11
01:22 UTC

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Just started on Youtube, all feedback is welcome - and if you like castle building games, you may like this one.

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2024/04/05
10:15 UTC

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critique me for a critique back! (Short segments below)

Hello All!

I want to use Youtube as a gaming diary for some games that I know I will love especially since I have an awful memory that's getting worse as I age. I really want to record these memories(since my brain is not doing it clearly).

So mainly for my future self and for anyone who stumbles onto these videos, I want to make them more watchable. I am unwitty and not much of an editor lol so I really am just going for clarity here.

Here's some long term goals for improvement:

  • Enunciation: Big one! I do want my speech to be clearer. Already feeling a big difference after just recording a handful of sessions, so I'm optimistic about this one.
  • Articulation: of my thoughts! I want to really try to put my thoughts into words better. Right now they just come out scrambled half the time. Any tips?

Please have a look at any of the below Resident Evil 7 segments from my first video and tell me what you think or just your impressions!

Here are some specific critiques I'm looking for:Volume: My voice versus the game. Do I sound to loud? Is the game too loud?Captions: Too few ? Too frequent? Bad placement?Clarity: Do I make any sense while I'm talking lol...? especially without the captions

Please have a look at any of the below Resident Evil 7 segments from my first video and tell me what you think or just your impressions! I think they have a good mix of where there's some overlap between the game and myself, the captions, and me talking sans subs.

Note: there is cussing across all clips(the F word many times) (also it's RE7 so)

Segment 1: (

Time Stamps: 18:50 to 20:25 (please stop at 20:25 to avoid a scare lol)

Segment 2: Mostly just me trying to understand what I'm looking at. slight creepy vibes. no scares.

Time Stamps: 26:10 to 30:12

Segment 3: (this is a part that scared me be warned(it's the>!dramatic Mia encounter iyk you know!<**))**

Time Stamps: 34:09 to 37:53

Thanks to anyone who does offer a critique, and also. Please let me know if you want me to critique parts of your video in return! Drop a link of a clip or timestamps for your video in the comments and I will try to offer any advice I can that I think might be helpful. I have NO experience making content so it would pretty much just be a viewer's perspective!

All the same, let me know!

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2024/04/02
05:04 UTC

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Let's Play SONIC GENERATIONS 3DS (Part 3)

https://youtu.be/IJHBnwda5SE?si=hLmNrrfiH8H24PGG

Please give feedback on anything about this video.

0 Comments
2024/03/29
17:24 UTC

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Thoughts on this OneyPlays thing?

I found this scrolling through twitter recently and I'm really unsure how to feel about it honestly, on the one hand it can be seen as kind of concerning (the Rick thing) but everything else this person mentions about Oney aside from the N-word comp seems outdated or downright wrong? Like they just link to 2 complete shitposts that are so easy to see through it's embarrass for op. Just actual Did You Know Gaming parodies talking about the OneyPlays group getting in trouble for outrageous shit as proof of Oney being terrible. Sorry if this breaks any guidelines, didn't know where else to really ask this. Been an on and off of Oney for a bit so seeing some of this has me on the fence on wether or not he's an okay human being or not. Thanks for your time. https://x.com/vibrifan2/status/1764805165180145755?=46

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2024/03/27
01:09 UTC

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Dragon's Dogma 2 In A Nutshell / Just dropped a new video I'm super proud of, would love some feedback! Thank you for your support!

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2024/03/24
21:58 UTC

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100ish videos in, how am I doing?

https://youtu.be/WviOfH4G9qU?si=9mMgQZR_CgZmZcNu

Some background: Mario Sunshine is my 4th series, after a quick MMPR for SNES, Zelda: Link to the Past, and an incomplete Bloodborne. Using OBS and an Elgato to capture footage, recording commentary separately through a USB soundboard.

Would love some comments with thoughts on how I’m doing and tips to improve, thanks!

0 Comments
2024/03/21
03:35 UTC

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How am I doing?

https://youtube.com/@AntDaHuman?si=NL2qIe3FqFHcAYXM

Been slowly trying out new things. Do you have a minute to spare a critique, please?

0 Comments
2024/03/20
20:57 UTC

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2024/03/20
16:02 UTC

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Where Am I At?

I always like to check in here and see how I'm doing. What do we think of this latest video?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zWIwY50oTc0

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2024/03/18
18:16 UTC

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Feedback on my Suck Up! video

Hey, I'm looking for some feedback on my Suck Up! video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAr4qSTABu8

0 Comments
2024/03/06
11:27 UTC

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I SKIPPED The Queue Time In HELLDIVERS 2, Then THIS Happened...

Hey everyone! I just dropped a video I'm super proud of. I'd love if you could watch it and give some tips/advice if you think of anything, thank you so much for the support! https://youtu.be/u5h7riXhR60?feature=shared

0 Comments
2024/03/02
05:34 UTC

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Sonic Project 06 video

Please rate this and tell me what I need to improve on!

https://youtu.be/1kjdN0J4HQU?si=EEH3OHPWqgxI1FID

0 Comments
2024/02/18
02:31 UTC

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Our wife and us made a super special Valentine’s Day episode! Show it some love!

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2024/02/14
21:10 UTC

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LP New Super Mario Bros. Wii (world 2)

Could someone please watch this and give feedback on what I need to improve?

https://youtu.be/2XXsk04mR9o?si=fzUE6xHxogByrQvb

0 Comments
2024/02/12
04:52 UTC

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First video posted in over a year, am I rusty?

Hey all, I've just uploaded my first video in over a year to YouTube. It's currently unlisted and I'd love some feedback and check if there's anything I need to do before I get it scheduled in.

General tips/advice would be awesome, also anything in regards to editing & the general stuff like is it too dark? Does the export quality seem ok? Is my mic all right?

Thanks a lot =)

Edit: I should post the link https://youtu.be/\_tpfOxa4K5o

8 Comments
2024/02/09
20:16 UTC

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The Game That DESTROYED Pokemon

Hey everyone! I just dropped a video I'm super proud of. I'd love if you could watch it and give some tips/advice if you think of anything, thank you so much for the support! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWZriTd6DQw

2 Comments
2024/02/02
23:47 UTC

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Henry Stickmin - breaking the bank and prison

I had a blast from the past playing this game it felt like I was young again playing it in school
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzsftscglPY

6 Comments
2024/02/02
23:31 UTC

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Feedback Needed: "Top 10 Global Food Destinations and cusines" YouTube Video!

Hey Reddit! I’ve just released a YouTube video about the world's top food destinations and I'm looking for your feedback. It's titled "Top 10 Global Food Destinations: Discover the World's Best Cuisines | Ultimate Foodie Travel Guide 2024".
I’d love your thoughts on the content, presentation, and overall quality. Any constructive criticism is welcome!
Here’s the link: https://youtu.be/saGVh5dJpyA
Thanks in advance!

2 Comments
2024/01/20
16:35 UTC

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Newbie need some suggestions and help

Hello guys!

I've embarked on an exciting journey on YouTube, creating content that delves into intriguing mysteries, explores questions about the afterlife, and now, dives into the world of sports! 🎥 My latest video features a unique take on the Ronaldo vs Messi debate using AI (artificial intelligence). I'd love for you to watch and share your thoughts. Your feedback and support would be incredibly valuable as I navigate these diverse topics. Check it out and spread some love if you enjoy it! Also consider liking the video, sharing with your friends and subscribing to the channel pls.

https://youtu.be/Nwdwyh9v5js?si=X1aywNkNtMM7ktgq

1 Comment
2024/01/18
02:33 UTC

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Thoughts on this obscure Marvel game?

0 Comments
2024/01/08
23:01 UTC

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goofy ahh scary ahh video

https://youtu.be/_TjMFGV1KDM

appratiate feedback

1 Comment
2024/01/05
13:30 UTC

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The Last Faith - Let's Play Part 4: Doctor Hermann Abomination (Boss) - ...

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2023/12/27
19:10 UTC

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I feel like I've become tone deaf and in need of a second opinion

So I've been trying to get the perfect balance between my voice and my gameplay audio for a solid month now and I feel like I'm having a hard time determining if my audio quality is good. I don't want my voice to be too overpowering but I don't want it to be too low either and I want the gameplay audio to be heard but it not overshadow or overwhelm my voice when I am speaking.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eH_u3q3pNOw

Thanks in advance.

3 Comments
2023/12/26
07:24 UTC

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