/r/AirForceBulletWriter
Comprehensive knowledge base for creating, managing and developing performance bullets. Seek feedback, mentor and develop your writing skills. Find resources for EPRs, OPRs and Awards.
Comprehensive knowledge base for creating, managing and developing performance bullets. Seek feedback, mentor and develop your writing skills.
/r/AirForceBulletWriter
Nellis/Creech Airman Council Liaison; Attended 2 meetings to coordinate events between Creech and Nellis Airman councils. Provided insight and coordinated events for Airman. Led food event for 50 Airman. Helped Raise $800 in funds--improved morale for Airman
I’m a Senior Airman, I’m not trying to give excuses it a lot of family issues has happened this year. Which left me with not a lot of time outside of work. Usually I’d have college courses and a bunch of volunteer work. I have always had nothing less then straight 5’s on my last two epr’s. My senior and leadership is away of the year. But is there any suggestions what may help. I’m a crew chief and this year I’ve been in support(CTK). So I’ll be rated as Support. Any help is most appreciated.
I'm trying to frame this bullet as I was by name requested to fill a technical function. I was previously hand selected to move to another section and fix their hurts. I have used hand-selected, and want to know if there is any way to frame " By name requested " as the starter? Any tips or advice is appreciated.
I’m preparing a brief for joint forces on the recommended structure of a EPR.
While going over this post:
I have a general idea of what descriptive bullets are from CMSgt Lee’s stripes book. But the others are still confusing to me.
Push seems to be talking about what teams you lead and their success. Pull seems to be about how you supported higher ups. But when I see examples of either it doesn’t line up quite right.
Same thing about deliberate and descriptive I’m not quite understanding the difference.
The STORY behind the bullet:
So, the guy learned that aircrew members who flew and were exposed to COVID during the complete GOV stop-movement of aircraft were eligible for medals. Specifically, the Armed Forces Service Medal and the Humanitarian Service Medal, depending on the missions they flew during that time frame.
He gathered the mission data and names (2.5K data points), and put together two MFRs (one for each medal type) containing all of it, then routed that up for Wg/CC signature.
359 service medals were awarded due to this.
The BULLET and it's evolution:
I wrote the bullet's first draft, and was told it had too many acronyms in it, and was hard to read/follow, which was true.
Here is the bullet I wrote after that, but people reading it asked "um, how did 2 MFRs do that? I don't understand how the action correlates to the impact"
- Led wg-lvl recognition proj; merged 2.5K items & prep'd/routed 2 MFRs f/CC coord--359 svc medals awd'd to Amn!
Any help would be GREATLY appreciated!
My twin sister is 2A6X1 and their bullet writing resources are absolutely trash. Lot's of gate keeping married to a lack of free time to devote to perfecting the craft. Anyone willing to share some examples of their own Aerospace Propulsion 7 level EPRs? Maybe we get a little "sowing circle" going?
I’m trying to figure out if there’s an “unwritten” order to 1206 bullets like with EPRs. Example: big impact/award bullets go on the back of the EPR. Is there a better/best place to put them in the stack on a 1206?
Hello all,
I've been inactive on the page for a while as I navigated holidays, AF life & PCS. I will be doing maintenance in the coming weeks & making sure everything is operational and continuing where I left off with content.
If there is anything in particular you would like to see, please post below or send me a message.
Wanted to know if Attending a Pre licensing Course to get a dealership license can be made into a bullet?
I am in need of some help as I am creating a bullet in regards to streamlining the project management aspect of my job as a religious affairs airmen. By gaining access to a door dash business account I can reduce the amount of redundant time spent in the logistics process of getting food and uplift items to our airmen while maintaining social distancing during CV-19. We can create even more Spiritual uplift events this way with the time we save. We are able to bolster our Spiritual resiliency lessons since we don't have to focus on logistics as much. I'm not sure how to fully capture this bullet.
https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=346937159873500
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**Topic:**Building Bullets: Basic to Intermediate Bullet Writing Experience
**Time:**THURSDAY-Oct 8, 2020 10:00 AM Eastern Time
Hello all and welcome if you're new,
We are still a relatively new subreddit that just passed the 2 month anniversary. I feel like the framework of the site is nearly complete with more value added guidance to be added as the months progress.
The subreddit saw 2.7K unique hits, 9.2K pageviews and almost 300 members joined for the month of September. Which percentage wise is a 1000% increase in traffic, 3400% increase in unique hits and a 5300% increase in membership.
I count about 54 references in the Access Center, 107 links & 29 posts. MS Teams Access Center is up, let me know if you have any access issues with any links or documents. Top voted posts were the Master Post for EPR Writing, Recommended EPR Layout Forms & Verb Cheat Sheets.
Goals for October:
Future Content Ideas: (November?)
I'm open to suggestions, feedback and additional guidance if you have any. Please post below or e-mail me at AirForceBulletWriter@gmail.com